Whoops, fell kind of behind on this thread. Let's catch up.
Sounds pretty good, I like the fast, up-beat nature, it sounds like it would work well in an intense boss fight. Based on the picture of Peach, my first inclination was to assume that this was a remix of some song from a Mario game, but going to the song on Soundcloud, I wasn't able to see if this was a remix of some existing son, so if this was an original composition, then good job.
Just a heads up, we discovered a minor authorisation issue with the ORG tags, which is why they weren't working consistently. It's now been rectified and they should be able to read direct links from most sites henceforth.
Cool, glad that was fixed.
Remix of Lena Raine's Otherside from the new Minecraft update
My first track in OrgMaker!
Not bad. Sounds like a faithful transcription as far as notes go. Although this can be hard to do with chiptune music, I feel as if some of the tracks are a bit sharp sounding, and could be tweaked a bit to better mimic the "smooth and soothing" feel in the original song. This can be time-consuming, but I would recommend playing around with the volume fade feature with notes in your ORG. Some example ORGs that use this feature are
my ORG remix of "In Dreams" from the Lord of the Rings soundtrack, and also
GIRakaCHEEZER's ORG remix of Ikachan's theme.
My forst ORG song. It is terrible, feel free to steal.
Hey, ya gotta start somewhere. Sounds like you have something of a beat built there, it just struggled to take form. Probably the main thing that holds this song back from being better is that you have all of these one-beat notes. Playing around with notes of different length might help you take your song to the next level. Maybe the next level isn't very high up from where it is right now, but it's somewhere. Another thing that can help is adding low-pitched quiet long notes as background noise. This can go a long way toward making your song sound better.