The beat sounds fine, although the instruments sound a bit off to me, so I'll assume that was sarcasm. They don't sound terrible, just a little bit off. Looks like it's incomplete, but not a bad start.
Sounds pretty good, I like the fast, up-beat nature, it sounds like it would work well in an intense boss fight. Based on the picture of Peach, my first inclination was to assume that this was a remix of some song from a Mario game, but going to the song on Soundcloud, I wasn't able to see if this was a remix of some existing son, so if this was an original composition, then good job.
Cool, glad that was fixed.
Not bad. Sounds like a faithful transcription as far as notes go. Although this can be hard to do with chiptune music, I feel as if some of the tracks are a bit sharp sounding, and could be tweaked a bit to better mimic the "smooth and soothing" feel in the original song. This can be time-consuming, but I would recommend playing around with the volume fade feature with notes in your ORG. Some example ORGs that use this feature are my ORG remix of "In Dreams" from the Lord of the Rings soundtrack, and also GIRakaCHEEZER's ORG remix of Ikachan's theme.
Hey, ya gotta start somewhere. Sounds like you have something of a beat built there, it just struggled to take form. Probably the main thing that holds this song back from being better is that you have all of these one-beat notes. Playing around with notes of different length might help you take your song to the next level. Maybe the next level isn't very high up from where it is right now, but it's somewhere. Another thing that can help is adding low-pitched quiet long notes as background noise. This can go a long way toward making your song sound better.
Thanks!
Cool, good job on the original composition then. Oh whoops, Daisy, no Peach. I knew I had seen that character and thought she might not have been Peach, even though it looked like her. A quick DuckDuckGo search helped me get updated on my Mario world lore.
I liked that ORG. It has a soft and somber tone at the beginning, and kind of builds into maybe having a glimmer of hope. I think you've gotten pretty good at making ORGs at this point, although I do get what you're saying that there's still room for improvement to make the whole thing sound a little bit smoother. I'm not the greatest source of musical advice, though, so I'm not really sure what pointers to give to make it better.
That's a great song! Hard to believe you made the original in only 1.5 hours. It sounds intense, yet subdued, like it could play while fighting a former ally who's gone rogue. The Org recreation seems to use a lot of clever tricks to make it sound more realistic, especially with how the volume for certain notes changes smoothly, I'm impressed!
The instruments you're using there blend together really well. That ringy echo-ey feel is really good, and the tune and background drums fit well. I wouldn't describe the tone as sad, exactly, but not super exciting, either. The tone is sort of in between, although you probably could use that to express a somber tone if you wanted to.
The remix sounds okay, although I get what you mean that it's sort of missing that extra substance that makes it really feel impactful. Unfortunately that's not something that I'm real good at giving advice on.
That's a really nice cover! I'll admit I'm not too fond of the original song, but you've made a very faithful representation here. It can't have been easy getting it to sound accurate, in those places where you layer lots of long notes together, but the instruments blend very naturally. The volume editing on the notes is also just right, and each note lasts 'as long as it should'. What I thought was really impressive was the part with the blue notes a little bit into the song, where you make the pitch go smoothly up and down - it achieves exactly the effect you're going for, which was probably not very easy to pull off! I do hope to see you post more often around here
