-WHOAAAA that turning animation in the game startup scene is really smooth
-WHOAAAA that new jump sound is really bouncy
-Most of the dialogue so far is pretty good, but there's some Odd capitalisation and punctuation in, a Lot of places. Your spelling could do with some double-checking as well, particularly every occurence of the word "Itoh".
-Despite their abundance, one thing I was not expecting to see in this was a Sonic crossover. I have been
thoroughly foiled.
(Fun fact for everyone: While Googling to see if someone had already made that joke I ran into art of Dr Robotnik. A CONSPIRACY??? There was some furry BE in there too but these days I expect that sort of thing regardless of actual search content.)
-It appears that the Shotgun is hidden in both helicopters simultaneously? I'm actually okay with this, but the chests don't stay open properly and the exits are missing <PRI's.
-The focus rate (<FOM) in the first cave is too fast, meaning it wasn't reset properly somewhere. I'm so used to it now that changes always throw my eyes out for a while
-After Toroko led Sue/me to her house, I decided to explore first. Upon heading to the Shack, I was... captured by King and put in prison? I don't remember this part D:
That'll do me for tonight, but I'll get the rest of my notes up soon, depending on how long this is.