Show off your org music...

Hi all,
I've been using OrgMaker 2.1.0 since around 2018-ish, though I've only shown my music to friends.
My more recent works are based off of an artist by the name of "inabakumori".
I am wondering what opinions the internet people have. I call this song "Devoid of Focus". (I am quite the newbie: I do not know how to embed, sorry.)

 

Not bad. It has an up-beat, urgent feel to it, and the instrument choice and usage of the drum tacks helps feed into that up-beat sense of urgency. The way the instruments fit together with each other was decent at times, but there were other times where it could have felt a bit more crisp, and the song just felt a bit busy.

The song starts to feel like the same old thing after about the 78th measure or so, and the bridges in between don't do much for me. Sometimes less is more, and at that point I would try to make it seamlessly loop instead of adding more content to it.

 

I see,
I made the song based off of rock-like instruments that some VOCALOID producers make. Sometimes the song was made busy on purpose to enforce the feeling of being overwhelmed. I do feel the same about the exact repetitiveness throughout the later parts of the song.

Thank you for the criticism.

 

Alright I know this isn't my best ORG, but Heres Scrap Brain Zone, or Clock (W)ork Zone

 

The notes seem accurate, but the instruments used feel a bit off. For instance, the main melody track sounds a lot more ringy than the original.

 

Hayden, sometimes I edit my ORGs to sound a bit better instrument-wise.

However, I needed a break from Sonic music and decided to rearrange The main theme of the NAMCO arcade "classic" Metro-Cross. Will go back and fix the SBZ ORG soon. EDIT: Replaced almost every prior Sonic 1 ORG to sound a bit better. Check them a bit after shoving this underrated arcade game's music down your listen-holes.

 

Sounds not too bad. A bit different from the effect of the original, but this rendition still sounds good.

I listened back again to your new version of Scrap-Brain Zone, and I think it sounds a little bit better than before, but I can't remember vividly enough what all the others sounded like before, so I guess I can't judge if there's been much improvement there.

 

OK so i went ahead and tried making a completely custom song using orgmaker, and I came up with a song I call "Wham-Bom". It has a sort of jazzy feel, and has that sort of early DG music feel, with an AABB melody in a C Minor Blues scale.

Probably fits with the aesthetics of like a casino or some sort of sleazy bar.

 

Upper Brinstar transcription

 

Fell a bit behind on this thread, but here's my input.

@dg125 Not bad for an original composition. I wouldn't say it really fits the aesthetics of a sleazy bar, but presumably a casino. It has a consistent tone, and things blend together okay.

@Raymundo That's a pretty good transcription. While it doesn't sound exactly like the original, it does a really good job of capturing that same spirit, and definitely feels like a an "ORG Rendition" of Upper Brinstar.

 

Here's another original, more ambient sort of track. I call it Anberon.

 

Not bad, it has kind of a hallowed, foreshadowing tone to it. The first several seconds remind me of Courtroom Lounge from Phoenix Wright Ace Attorney.
I like what you're trying to do with the "zingyness" that you add in, and it sounds okay, but something about it doesn't quite fit in as seamlessly as it could. But overall, decent composition.

 

Gerudo Valley from The Legend of Zelda : Ocarina of Time

 

That's a pretty good transcription. The instruments and everything sound solid, and it all blends together pretty well. I feel as if it captures the spirit of the original quite well.

 

oh boy this ones probably gonna be controversial

Here's my latest ORG, a remake/remix of OPPOSITION (instrumental) by Maevings, a well known/semi-controversial Friday Night Funkin' VS. Dave and Bambi fantrack which pioneered the style of "spamtracks," as they're called.
My version, however, is less Wii Crash Sound and more of an ambient track for like, I dunno, calmer areas like gardens, or underwater. I dunno.

tl;dr i made an org of a dave and bambi fantrack lel

 

Made this a while ago, but it's an original theme for Su- from teh beta
also tried my best to get it to sound as pixel-like as possible

 

@dg125
Heh, I don't have much context about the whole controversy surrounding the original song, but I must say, that ORG remix sounds a lot smoother than the song you linked to, so I like it.

@Vozaxhi
I tried playing that ORG in the plugin, but for some reason it wasn't working, so I had to download the ORG and play it locally in ORGMaker. Not bad for an original composition. It has somewhat of a familiar sound to Toroko's theme, but with a bit less of a "playful and innocent" feel to it, which is kind of more fitting for Sue's character, which I guess I kind of project onto Su from the beta concept art. The tune also sounds believably like "Cave Story music" in a way.

 

Here's some originals I haven't posted here. Some are recent, one is not as recent. Overlay, Rupert's Day, and Hidef were all written on guitar first before I transcribed the parts I needed by ear into orgmaker.
HERE <--- is also a collection of my personal favorite originals I've made over the years and all the covers that I can identify with proper naming. Incomplete tracks should be named accordingly. These are free to be used as a resource for modders in need of ORGs, as long as credit is given.
Ninety

Overlay

Rupert's Day

Hidef

 

Ascension - ORG Demake

Drive Mirror

Spoiler: Original

Ascension

Theme of the Valley of Ivory Dust - Chromatic Shift https://doukutsuclub.knack.com/database#my-mods/mod-details/6324197703204900215c4e73/

soundcloud.com

Time Taken: ~2.5 hours
Description: Organya demake of Ascension (Valley of Ivory Dust) from Chromatic Shift - me, Infinityβ and GalacticSilver's Modfest 32 submission
Made with the same org waves as the original, minus the LFO vibrato and wave-shapers

 

I fell a bit behind on this, but got some time this morning to catch up on these compositions!

@2DBro
Ninety:
Kind of soft, "pressing onward" kind of tone

Overlay:
Felt a bit choppy at the beginning, but is decent afterward, and gets kind of interesting.

Rupert's Day:
Got my attention right off the bat. Had a nice satisfying tone that I could picture during the finishing credits of a game.

Hidef:
I like it, this can fit in a variety of different scenarios, and you make an interesting use of some of those lesser used drum tracks.

@AquaDoesStuff
Aqua, I always love hearing your music! The different tracks all blend in so nicely. Sounds a little bit better in its original form, but the ORG format still carries a good mystical feel to it.