Show off your org music...

Yeah, it's really neat, and I love the bass-line. I actually think it sounds more like a spooky and/or suspenseful area than a boss fight (maybe something you'd hear right before a boss fight).

 

It sounds good, and very menacing. I think I'd agree that it's the best song you've made so far. The one thing I don't really like, there are a lot of high notes, and they can be a little annoying.

P.S., I subscribed to your blog. :J

I would have thankyou for the subscription earlier but my internet is acting weird. I personally think that high notes and low notes make a nice combonation when done properly.

 

Alright, I made a new song. It's pretty short, but I think it's great.
It's also one of the only songs that I used a minor chord in...
"M"
I couldn't think of a name for it.

Edit:
Alright, I fixed the link.

 

Can someone somehow compose this in orgASM?

 

Incidentally, I was just trying to make a Chopin piece in Organya, though not that particular one. I might use it in The Paradise Project.

And who uses ORGasm? It's junk.

@Ollie: Cool idea, and I overall liked it. It might be better if you varied it a bit more at different points (maybe at more bass to part of it).

 

Heh, I tried to have more variation, but it just didn't sound right. Next time I make a minor song, it's not going to be in the (Stereotypical) A minor key.

 

As long as everyone else is making requests...


EDIT:

http://www.mediafire.com/?hpssr32gcx32yb8

Yeah, it sucks, but it's better than the other stuff I made earlier (hence the name). At least this isn't just one pattern repeating a bajillion times.

EDIT:

Another one:

http://www.mediafire.com/?n80p3j6vdketxs1

Sounds quite nice to me. I quite like the little flourish right before it repeats.

EDIT:

And here's another version of the same, this time with percussion:

http://www.mediafire.com/?10s2cbucuef930l

 

:J.

 

An attempt at a higher tempo:

http://www.mediafire.com/?1kwkiop9yr0k4c8

 

:J.

The worst song.

Not really. It's good, for the most part, but it kinda annoys me. Don't worry about that, it's my opinion. Good :J job.

 

I made this.

Yeah.
It's my first completed org that is of my own composition.

OffToWork.org

As the title suggests, I tried to go for an industrial feel, with strict rythms and drum beats.

It's also kind of jazzy.

I wrote this for piano first, but then I decided to make an org out of it as well (albeit with a few alterations)

Enjoy, and critisim is always welcome.

 

It sounds great, and no flaws that I can tell. Congrats at that, especially since it's your first original one.

 

I really like the musical idea of it. I think you could do more with the volume envelope though, especially in the chords near measure 30. You're like I was when I first came to the forums in that you seem to be most used to composing for the piano, where you don't necessarily have to be super specific about dynamics .

 

Hey, I'd like some criticism too.

 

http://www.mediafire.com/?f3brf2yzus8sk0o

This is my first ORG in a while, but when I first heard this song originally I thought it would be cool to make into an ORG. If you can't tell the song is modeled after http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rudkeNEJk_s Runaway by Kanye West. I got bored half way through and switched it over to something a little more video-gamey. It's still a work in progress and the middle section is a little to barren for my taste, any suggestions would be welcome.

 

Hey, I'd like some criticism too.

As you wish, sir. Well, the one titled "metal" was....Frightening, to say the least.
Harmony is, well, frightening as well. As was Better. Maybe you should focus more on melody than randomly putting notes. They all sound similar to what I made when I first started, just to try it out. (I was fooling around, too)

 

I finished this org I was working on for awhile now.

Lithium Carbonate

Spoiler

Based off of "Li2CO3" by Venetian Snares.

@Cult: Sounds good. I think maybe the percussion could be a bit more expressive.

@StopSign: It sounds interesting. I haven't listened to the original though.

@Shilcote: "metal" just kind of sounds annoying. I'd recommend not using wav 00 for the first part.
"Harmony" is lacking, and doesn't seem to actually stick to one key.
I recommend you look up a little bit of musical theory, namely scales.

 

I totally listened to that song

 

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is awesome . The way the notes in the chords fade in and out kinda reminds me of Xaser's "Twisted Vortex". The percussion is amazing too.

Runaway is pretty cool, though the beginning seemed a little too plain. The song as a whole could stand to be a bit more intense, especially with a name like "Runaway".

Schilcote, I pretty much concur with what everyone else has said. Some of the rhythms you use are pretty cool, but the notes lack direction.

 

BAM second org.

This one is called CityLights.org.

Using mostly the same chord progression as my previous org, it is intended to be used in the same location in a mod or something. It has some slight volume variation, making so the melody doesn't outweigh the harmony, and some neato chords (woo chords) towards the end.
I am toying with instrument sets, and discovering that some waves are more tolerable than others at different octaves.
Nightime as opposed to daytime.

I hope it isn't too similar...
Feedback is once again welcomed :3