Oct 11, 2016 at 3:21 AM
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-Looks after measure 28-
Hill Top is alright. I'm not the biggest fan of the original composition, and there are a few nuances with the transcription. The most noticeable being the intro, but you probably already knew that. OrgMaker just ain't capable of note slides. The instrumentation also doesn't feel entirely accurate with the original (the lead sounds more whiny and buzzy in the original, so 37 or 16 would probably fit better than 25). Fairly accurate outside of that, tho.
Do you mind if I add these to the ORG/Pxtone Vault playlist I have? It includes ORGs from myself and other people on Soundcloud.I have a bunch of ORG songs on my Soundcloud page here. Most (if not, almost all) of them are covers of other video game music, though.
(Pardon my lack of experience on threads, I usually don't use them. =\ )
I do not mind at all.Do you mind if I add these to the ORG/Pxtone Vault playlist I have? It includes ORGs from myself and other people on Soundcloud.
So I've got two new ORGs. First up is a remix of Scorching Back that I've been itching to do for a while. The second is a very lazy transcription.
I'm not sorry.
I knew it was only a matter of time before Lazytown ORGs would start popping up...
Inferno - I like the idea of integrating the normal Egg Corridor theme with the Scorching Back music. I can see you're trying to alter the theme so that it's not a direct transcription of "Mischievous Robot" on top of "Scorching Back" - which is good! Keep playing around with those notes, though. Track 2 at bar 46-48 sounds really weird. Try making track 2's note order A flat, C, F and back to the C. Adjusting the notes will probably require a bit of theory knowledge and patience/a good ear if you really wanted to tune the melody to Scorching Back's chord progressions.
Also, I think it might be best for the notes at the beginning to start soft as well, much like the percussion. Maybe not as soft, but some buildup volume-wise in the wave sounds would be nice as well.
Cooking by the Book - This one sounds pretty good overall, especially the accompaniment. Doubling the resolution would allow you to add volume enveloping to the chorus, so that the repeated notes don't sound like one long note. Also I feel like the chorus could be played by a different track, but eh..
Yeah, a minor seventh will tend to be more of an interesting sound. Just don't have a B natural like you did in the former file.I don't know how the heck I didn't hear the clear dissonance in that part of Track 2 in Inferno. This isn't my first rodeo with remixes, I should've noticed that. Thanks for pointing it out! I think A flat, C, E flat, C works better and sounds fine, though.
That just leads to the main Dropbox page. You have to make a shareable link.
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