Oct 4, 2014 at 5:07 PM
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I really have no idea where to put this. I just wanted to get some feedback on graphics and style (ie: lighting, shadows, sound). I've been staring at my own work for so long that I've lost the ability to see the wires sticking out of things. Don't read too deep onto the dialogue section (or just skip over it), there is no context to be had.
EDIT: why is the embed appearing all tiny? I'll just post the raw link I guess
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5JWnKSO7y6k
Any suggestions/criticisms are welcome. The jumps/stutters are due to running fraps on a pretty weak laptop.
EDIT: And now It embeds by itself? I'm so confused....
EDIT: why is the embed appearing all tiny? I'll just post the raw link I guess
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5JWnKSO7y6k
Any suggestions/criticisms are welcome. The jumps/stutters are due to running fraps on a pretty weak laptop.
EDIT: And now It embeds by itself? I'm so confused....