Alright, before you all yell at me for bumping an old thread/talking to a dead member, this is relevant, and though Xaser currently is not on the forums, he will probably return with another update eventually.
Anyway, Xaser, I just noticed that, at the beginning of this mod, you have the same "jerky camera motion" problem that Kaeso had in Curly Brace's Story. This occurs when you forget to use <FOM0016 at the end of a cutscene, but it's not really obvious because the camera focus is automatically restored to the player when you use the <TRA command. If you don't get what I mean, read the Curly Brace's Story thread; I posted a more detailed explanation of the problem and how to fix it in that thread. Basically, just make sure you always remember to put <FOM0016 at the end of any cutscene in which camera focus moves away from the player.