It's looking good.
Some errors:
The block beneath the Cthulthu is moving. Changing...
You say FRind it rather then find it
When you select the map system the chest stays full. This is the same with the Spur
When you select something the chest disappears rather than having its lid open.
There is no chest for the snake.
You are able to get all the weapons and then that means that one of the weapons is not in the area.
The hermit says the same thing after you get the weapons and you can get the booster twice. It does not actually appear in your inventory though.
Apart from that I like the beginning!
Edit: First post has been updated with the new link.
Also. Maybe Lunar Soul can fix up some of these small errors.