T-Jack said:Storytelling takes time, that's how. In 76 pages, Atravir only got to the Labyrinth Balrog fight, and if the time rule of script (1 page of script = 1 minute of film) is true, he already got past your one hour.
T-Jack said:Storytelling takes time, that's how. In 76 pages, Atravir only got to the Labyrinth Balrog fight, and if the time rule of script (1 page of script = 1 minute of film) is true, he already got past your one hour.