Ok, couple of bugs:
1)There are some black blocks you put in the Cemetery. [bored]Don't you dare be a sneaky bastard, because I can spot those blocks from the dark background.[/bored]
2) Saying "No" to the Hermit triggers the "opening chest to get polar star" script.
Suggestions:
1) When Santa says "Can you kill the robots, then?" he uses the bawling face, I recommend the other, mildly sad Santa face.
2) Spellcheck here; When you talk to Hatty (Before talking to the Hermit), he asks if you want to ride his boat. Quote then says "were". That can be easily fixed.
3) The Gaudi need to look more like robots and less like Gaudi, I suggest making a new sprite set for the Gaudi to make them look more like robots.
4) The chest disappears in the place where you find the sword once you open it. Instead, add an opened chest there, while removing the regular chest.
Basically all I see wrong with the mod. Congratulations. You've made a decent, playable mod!