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Um... Hi there, guys, I just finished reading this whole thread (yeah, from the VERY beginning) and I must say I like this idea. Both the script and the sequel story are great. While reading I've taken down some notes:
- Atravir, you didn't mention those two bubbles containing the lunchbox and the goth girl in the first scene. Well, I didn't notice those two on the first time watching the intro. Maybe they could be in the background, y'know, "Don't look at us, we're not here..."
- If you're gonna use that "Curly recovers from her amnesia" thing, you can have Quote remember in the sequel. They can get some information about Ballos that way...
- Blooper: When Quote falls on some spikes, they bend like they are made of rubber. You don't want your actors get injured, do you? (Yes, I AM aware of this whole Anime business.)
- Non-blooper, but could be funny: Quote carrying all nine weapons form the game and saying something like "I'm SO glad I don't have to have all these in the movie"
Well, that's all for now. Oh, and where do I get my *Polar Star*?