• Hey everyone happy Christmas Eve we're aware of what's happened with the source code so to keep this simple absolutely don't post it on the site or use it to make mods with (it's not particularly preferable toward this end anyway) and tread lightly in general until we see how this settles, thanks to all and have a great holiday season -DT

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How good are you so far?
I can make a 3d cheeseburger. That's about it.
 
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End. :D
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I don't want to wade through the thousands of pages in this thread, so is there a link to the latest script or whatever?
 
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Celtic Minstrel said:
I don't want to wade through the thousands of pages in this thread, so is there a link to the latest script or whatever?
Unfortunatly, the only option at this point in the Spam-Can is to do the wading.
If you do, put the link in you sig or something.
 
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Or wait for Atravir to post it again. :D
 
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Celtic Minstrel said:
Or wait for Atravir to post it again. :D
If that happens, I'll be the last to care.
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Me + anime = fail.
But I wish him luck in his endevour.
And, if he does repost, act quick or the spam will regenerate and close in on it.
 
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Atravir said:
I can make a 3d cheeseburger. That's about it.
Well you are doing better than I did. :o

Celtic Minstrel said:
I don't want to wade through the thousands of pages in this thread, so is there a link to the latest script or whatever?
http://homebase-kice.com/ftp/files/CS Script.rar

For next time search the posts in this thread for November/December-ish 2007, remember that he released it as an "early Chistmas present".

Celtic Minstrel said:
Or wait for Atravir to post it again. :D
Or myself. :D

DragonBoots said:
Unfortunatly, the only option at this point in the Spam-Can is to do the wading.
If you do, put the link in you sig or something.
Please do not do that, it was buried for a reason.
 
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For next time search the posts in this thread for November/December-ish 2007, remember that he released it as an "early Chistmas present".
That was before I even discovered the game, so I couldn't have known that.

Anyway, thanks!
 
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I can make a 3d cheeseburger. That's about it.


i has a real chez burga
 
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Celtic Minstrel said:
That was before I even discovered the game, so I couldn't have known that.

Anyway, thanks!
Alright, no worries.

To XristosX: AAAAHHHHHHHHH!!! (response to the pikachu avatar)

EDIT: Cool, page 150. :D
 
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Okay, I think it's pretty good so far! There are a bunch of spelling and grammar errors that I won't report just now. I do have a few questions and comments though.

  • I'm not sure I like the omission of the Hermit Gunsmith at the start – what about when Quote gets the Spur?
  • How on earth does Santa know his name when he arrives in Grasstown? And the same for Chaco. And Balrog, in the fight in the power room. Nobody should know Quote's name, except for Curly after she regains her memory.
  • The brief sighting of Curly just after teleporting in is missing. Surely that wouldn't too hard to add?
  • I think there should be something about "breaking the curse on the sunstones" to get to Jenka's house. Probably nothing like in the game, just some sort of barrier that they must get past.
  • And I think she should give him a Life Pot, too. Rather than being exactly like the game's Life Pot, it could possibly be used a two or even three times. Basically, it's a healing potion.
  • The scene where Misery kidnaps the remaining Mimigas is pretty nice, considering you basically wrote that yourself.
  • I believe the blue things in the labyrinth are robots. Are you going to mention that?

Near the beginning of the thread you said you were going to omit Ballos. I don't know if you changed your mind since then because I only read the first few pages before skipping to the end of the thread, but I think that including him would be a good idea. You could probably cut out most of Hell itself and skip almost right to the Seal Chamber – maybe stopping off in the Statue Room.

That's all for now. :D
 
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Celtic Minstrel said:
Near the beginning of the thread you said you were going to omit Ballos. I don't know if you changed your mind since then because I only read the first few pages before skipping to the end of the thread, but I think that including him would be a good idea. You could probably cut out most of Hell itself and skip almost right to the Seal Chamber – maybe stopping off in the Statue Room.

That's all for now. :D
Atravir plans to do Ballos in a sequel. Trying to insert ballos in the end worked great for the game, but it would ruin a movie since Ballos had nothing to do with the main plot and would take away from the ending.
 
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To XristosX: AAAAHHHHHHHHH!!! (response to the pikachu avatar)

thats a bad ahhhhhh isnt it :D
it was for a thing called gejinka pokemon ^^

Andwhyisit said:
Atravir plans to do Ballos in a sequel. Trying to insert ballos in the end worked great for the game, but it would ruin a movie.

im not sure, it could work, whats the problem?
 
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thats a bad ahhhhhh isnt it :D
it was for a thing called gejinka pokemon ^^
o.o
Why a Pikachu?
Why?
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(this is addictive :D)
 
Mar 3, 2008 at 6:48 AM
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Celtic Minstrel said:
Okay, I think it's pretty good so far! There are a bunch of spelling and grammar errors that I won't report just now. I do have a few questions and comments though.

  • I'm not sure I like the omission of the Hermit Gunsmith at the start – what about when Quote gets the Spur?
  • How on earth does Santa know his name when he arrives in Grasstown? And the same for Chaco. And Balrog, in the fight in the power room. Nobody should know Quote's name, except for Curly after she regains her memory.
  • The brief sighting of Curly just after teleporting in is missing. Surely that wouldn't too hard to add?
  • I think there should be something about "breaking the curse on the sunstones" to get to Jenka's house. Probably nothing like in the game, just some sort of barrier that they must get past.
  • And I think she should give him a Life Pot, too. Rather than being exactly like the game's Life Pot, it could possibly be used a two or even three times. Basically, it's a healing potion.
  • The scene where Misery kidnaps the remaining Mimigas is pretty nice, considering you basically wrote that yourself.
  • I believe the blue things in the labyrinth are robots. Are you going to mention that?

Near the beginning of the thread you said you were going to omit Ballos. I don't know if you changed your mind since then because I only read the first few pages before skipping to the end of the thread, but I think that including him would be a good idea. You could probably cut out most of Hell itself and skip almost right to the Seal Chamber – maybe stopping off in the Statue Room.

That's all for now. :D
About the Quote's name thing - Atravir had earlier released a version which had "the boy" or "boy" written everywhere for "Quote", but it became a bit annoying while reading, so this version he used automatic text replacement because he was a lazy ass.

The sighting of Curly - that was a cool part, but Atravir had to omit it due to the presence of King, who would certainly have given a hostile chase.

Sunstones? Once Atravir coompletes the scrript, he can decide if there is space to add that. I agree with you though.

Maybe Atravir might consider the life pot. The problem is, Quote doesn't come too close to dying too often, but your idea might help him to maybe skip the scene in the waterway cabin (although I hope not).
 
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Atravir is good at what he does and will try to fit it as close to the original story as possible while making it work as a movie, but he cannot fit everything in or afford to have Quote backtrack.
 
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andwhyisit said:
o.o
Why a Pikachu?
Why?
-_-

(this is addictive :D)
o.o
Why do you steal my style andwhyisit?
Why?
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(Seriously, why?)
 
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o.o
Why do you steal my style andwhyisit?
Why?
-_-

(Seriously, why?)
o.o
why do you care?
why?
-_-

Edit: also lol

miraigamer.jpg
 
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o.o
Why do you steal my style andwhyisit?
Why?
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(Seriously, why?)
andwhynot? :D

xristosx said:
o.o
why do you care?
why?
-_-

Edit: also lol

miraigamer.jpg
Um, XristosX.. THAT WAS THE 1500TH MOVIE SCRIPT THREAD POST YOU JUST MADE!!!!!!!
 
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