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Aug 11, 2009 at 6:31 AM
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Give her a lightsaber, it'll make your drawing better, guaranteed.
K now srsly, the shot's pretty blurry, so it's hard to see what's going on with her right arm, but she looks like an amputee. If you're using her huge-ass sweater (it's too friggin big, man) to cover up her body because you're not good at anatomy, refrain from doing that in the future. Practice makes perfect, and anatomy is almost as important as facial expressions.
Nothing is more important than expressions, sorry.
 
Aug 11, 2009 at 6:51 AM
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Captain Fabulous said:
But then where's the bones? And the Demon Crown is on the Doctor's head, not Kings. NITPICKY! It's a really great drawing, though.
I believe you misunderstood me. I said it was most likely a reference to it, not a drawing of it.
 
Aug 11, 2009 at 9:42 AM
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Celtic Minstrel said:
Well, if you don't mention the good side, it's a lot more discouraging for the artist.

Good job missing the point: I don't give a damn if you did X good if you didn't do Y good as well. If you can't stand the idea that you did something wrong and need some praise to focus on instead, why do you bother reading my critique? You don't have the will to improve, so nothing I say should affect you. Stop whining.

Yakkers said:
Here's a little sketch of Sue I did. My scanner isn't set up so I had to just take a picture.
http://i999.photobucket.com/albums/a...7/DSCN0402.png
Kind of a blank expression, but still better than anything else I've drawn.

Ugly. The lower half of her head should bulge outward to the left, among other things.
 
Aug 11, 2009 at 9:57 AM
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All in all, ignoring fanart shall be the most impolite thing. :(
 
Aug 11, 2009 at 12:55 PM
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Sick Bastard said:
Good job missing the point: I don't give a damn if you did X good if you didn't do Y good as well. If you can't stand the idea that you did something wrong and need some praise to focus on instead, why do you bother reading my critique? You don't have the will to improve, so nothing I say should affect you. Stop whining.
By omitting the good side, you're painting an inaccurate picture of how good someone's art is. If you want to make it clear that you think the art is mediocre, then the best way to do it is to say so, explicitly, possibly even twice. It's not a huge step from that to saying "You're a terrible artist and should stop drawing".

But it seems that you can't bring yourself to see my point, so... shall we drop it?
 
Aug 11, 2009 at 3:43 PM
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Captain Fabulous said:
Give her a lightsaber, it'll make your drawing better, guaranteed.
K now srsly, the shot's pretty blurry, so it's hard to see what's going on with her right arm, but she looks like an amputee. If you're using her huge-ass sweater (it's too friggin big, man) to cover up her body because you're not good at anatomy, refrain from doing that in the future. Practice makes perfect, and anatomy is almost as important as facial expressions.
Nothing is more important than expressions, sorry.
That's basically what I did with the sweater. I have almost no drawing skill so everything else I drew came out looking like a mutated doctor suess character, so I just got a little over excited when something looked remotely like it was supposed to.
 
Aug 11, 2009 at 6:17 PM
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SB, quit being an ass. Simple as that.

Or how about YOU try drawing something?
 
Aug 11, 2009 at 7:24 PM
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I don't think Sick Bastard is saying drawing is easy, Wild Desu. He just doesn't bother with compliments because he doesn't think the artists can use those to improve. Sick Bastard, why don't you offer your opinion instead of your insults.
SO ANYWAY. WE WERE DRAWING STUFF BEFORE. REMEMBER THAT? GOOD TIMES. SOMEONE SHOULD DRAW CHUBBY MISERY TO DISTRACT US.
 
Aug 12, 2009 at 3:34 AM
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Wild Desu said:
SB, quit being an ass. Simple as that.

Or how about YOU try drawing something?

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Aug 12, 2009 at 4:37 AM
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Yeah I'll admit that you're a decent artist.

But even so, insulting others' art is just plain rude.

And if what CF says is correct, that you don't think that the artist's can improve, well, that's awfully high and mighty of you, don't you think?

If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at all /cliche.

That's all. I'm done.
 
Aug 12, 2009 at 6:15 AM
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Wild Desu said:
But even so, insulting others' art is just plain rude.

I suppose so. You'll have to tell me what that's like sometime.

if what CF says is correct, that you don't think that the artist's can improve,

He didn't say that and that isn't what I think.

That's all. I'm done.

Goodnight.
 
Aug 12, 2009 at 6:50 AM
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Well, Sick Bastard, I could tell you that I like your Fat Misery drawing, even though I was expecting something cuter, but you still pulled it off. I could tell you that, but I won't, because you won't appreciate it. I will tell you that your squiggly art style is annoying and you should have at least attempted symmetry. That and she looks like a dude.
 
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(Yay, I'm mediocre and that's better than bad!)

All right, I used references this time and such. How's this? Better?
 
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WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS SHIT
YOU MADE QUOTE INTO SOME SORT OF MOD
 
Aug 12, 2009 at 9:48 PM
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Jackalope said:
(Yay, I'm mediocre and that's better than bad!)

All right, I used references this time and such. How's this? Better?

Why is he wearing the flags of Britain and its former colonies? Why is he holding a giant kitchen knife? Why do his tanktop and scarf cut into his shoulder, and why is his head so tall?

I am confuse
 
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Sick Bastard said:
Why is he wearing the flags of Britain and its former colonies?

From left to right, it's British Quote, American (a.k.a. our) Quote, Canadian Quote, and Australian Quote.

I gave the three non-Quotes names, but they're not really important.
 
Aug 12, 2009 at 9:57 PM
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Jackalope said:
From left to right, it's British Quote, American (a.k.a. our) Quote, Canadian Quote, and Australian Quote.

BUT WHY?
 
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Why is Canadian Quote crying? Did the local CBC broadcast cut out in the middle of Hockey Night in Canada?
 
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BECAUSE I WANTED IT THAT WAY

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Why is Canadian Quote crying? Did the local CBC broadcast cut out in the middle of Hockey Night in Canada?

Because Canada is made of fail and lose.

No, in seriousness, I'm not sure why. Perhaps because he's sick in advance of getting confused for the other Quotes.
 
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