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hella
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http://puu.sh/b3IFN/2834ba48af.png
inconsistentcy?
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unnecessary line breaks with most of the scientist NPCs in the second house
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http://puu.sh/b3IQE/d74f3eb3c2.png
"dont" should be "don't"
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http://puu.sh/b3ISz/6bcadd2c1d.png
"arent" should be "aren't", and "posative" should be "positive"
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http://puu.sh/b3IVK/5b06dc6178.png
instead of "Some the others" it should be "Some of the others"
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http://puu.sh/b3IXZ/41cb6e7b29.png
"posative" should be "positive"
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http://puu.sh/b3IZD/e98f7e19ec.png
"Isnt" should be "Isn't"
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http://puu.sh/b3J9g/29bf4b9eec.png
"Mat" should probably be "Matt"
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http://puu.sh/b3Jvk/dd1a9a87e8.png
http://puu.sh/b3JvO/90f821ac15.png
more inconsistentcy
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http://puu.sh/b3JBQ/d55f4697a1.png
"Mat" should be "Matt" probably
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http://puu.sh/b3JGd/fbbbcbb0a2.png
you know what I'm gonna disregard the Mat thing now
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http://puu.sh/b3JSs/0a59c7bcf3.png
"should of" should be "should have" but I guess it isn't really an issue
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there's a lot of line breaks in the chats
maybe intentional but if so ewww
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http://puu.sh/b3Kd5/15114abf88.png
"dont" should be "don't"
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http://puu.sh/b3L0B/c850f217c7.png
"dont" should be "don't" come on man
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wow that was short but I liked it
hella