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Sep 18, 2008 at 6:34 PM
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Great idea, Ray!
 
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Celtic Minstrel said:
Great idea, Ray!
Gasp! The world is going to end! I had a good idea!
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Sep 19, 2008 at 1:18 AM
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is this actualy going to happen or is this just for fun now.

Ive really never heard of a movie script that took over a year to write. Maybe a coded but not movie. Just wondering.

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KuroKun said:
is this actualy going to happen or is this just for fun now.

Ive really never heard of a movie script that took over a year to write. Maybe a coded but not movie. Just wondering.

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Atravir doesn't have the time to write it anymore. The script has been sitting around gathering dust since late last year. :(
 
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A couple of comments: I think Atravir wanted Curly to die. I don't want that, I like Curly too much. :( What I want to happen is that Curly heroically gives Quote her air tank and then when the Core vanishes, a giant crack opens up into the ground, sucking Quote and Curly into the Waterway. Quote loses her in the waterway and believes she's dead until the Plantation- that way we get all the emotion of her dying and all the plot of the Ma Pignon sequence.
But yes, I do plan to add to the pre-Core fight and maybe some more rooms or shutter trouble. andwhyisit's right- I don't want to have to go straight from one boss fight to another.
I don't really want to have the Core rising from out of the water- then I won't get to do that cool jump cut with the eye. Simply speaking, this room is where the core lives. Why would it want to lurk in a hole in the bottom?
Anyways.
I'll have more time to work on this on the weekend.
 
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innocent.bystander said:
I think Atravir wanted Curly to die.
I think you weren't paying attention. Read the first post again.

I really should document every script suggestion, ideas,etc. in this thread.

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I don't really want to have the Core rising from out of the water- then I won't get to do that cool jump cut with the eye.
That's the thing. Core is rising out of the water in the background during the jump cut with the eye, then after the jump cut it does the closeup of core.

In order to have the eye close up and still do the rising core background you must have the left side of quote's face covering only half the screen so that you can see behind him.
 
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Oh. Sorry.
I think I'm gonna keep it like it is- it blends the emotions of the easy playthrough with the plot of the hard one.
But Curly must live. She must.
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... Talk about a random moment... NOW ON WITH THE COOKIES(Show, whatever)

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*Raekuul tastes the script.*

Needs more hints to the gun not being Quote's, or some other way to create a way to beam spam...

Hmm... yeah, the Spur is good for dealing a lot of damage in a short amount of time, but it a) is slow to fire at full power and b) requires a direct line of fire. Quote probably won't use it unless there's nothing else left to try. Just a thought.
 
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What about that final section of labyrinth? That's where we actually see that Curly can fight, so maybe it should be included. It needn't be as long, though.

Of course, she also fights the Core with him...

...Has there been another update?
 
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My friend wants to kill off Quote. I don't think it's a good idea, but what about you guys?
I'm thinking that Sue should die at the end, though, after she becomes frenzied. Quote will be forced to kill both her and Misery.
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Sep 19, 2008 at 9:15 PM
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But then whatabout Misery's role in Balrog rescuing them?
 
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Balrog never rescues them. Hell is never explored in this movie. The island falls and blows up. But I think Balrog's gonna escape- I have it all planned out. There'll be a shot, in the very end of the movie, with him flying away with all the mutant Sky Dragons.
 
Sep 19, 2008 at 9:46 PM
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Do. Not. Kill. Quote.

Period.


I don't think anyone should die apart from Toroko and King.
 
Sep 19, 2008 at 11:43 PM
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innocent.bystander said:
My friend wants to kill off Quote. I don't think it's a good idea, but what about you guys?
I'm thinking that Sue should die at the end, though, after she becomes frenzied. Quote will be forced to kill both her and Misery.
Questions?
Umm... kill off Quote? WHYYYYYYYY?
 
Sep 20, 2008 at 12:09 AM
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That's what I said. The emotional aspect, he said.

For those of you that might have made the connection, this friend is actually Ragamuffin.
 
Sep 20, 2008 at 1:32 AM
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I don't think Sue should die either. Nor Misery.
 
Sep 20, 2008 at 2:54 AM
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yo
the reason i think that quote has to die is for emotional purposes
quote destroys the core by using and surpassing his power to kill the damn thing
he is dying while staring at the iron bond and when he dies the iron bond falls from his hand in slow motion and the lasts thing you see before the credits is the iron bond laying on the ground

and quote killing sue was my partly idea too
 
Sep 20, 2008 at 4:13 AM
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No.

I'm sorry, but Quote is the hero of the story. If he died it would ruin the story, turning it into a tragedy. Cave Story is not a tragedy. It's a drama, maybe even a comedy, but not a tragedy. Therefore the hero must live.

Quote killing Sue could make sense, though. But that doesn't make me agree with it – I think Sue should live.

As I've said, King and Toroko should be the only ones to die.
 
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