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Sep 19, 2007 at 2:22 PM
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andwhyisit said:
With both images, the ears need more detail so that they look more like ears, look at manga/anime and see how the ears are drawn.

The hands need to be worked on, relax your own hands to the side and see what position they take.

Also the width of the two arms are different and you made the hair too tall in the far away view.

thanks, :eek: im really shit with feet hands and well yeah ears
hair too tall?
 
Sep 19, 2007 at 2:49 PM
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You did a brilliant job of drawing the clothing, it looks like a professional job from the neck down in the closeup

xristosx said:
hair too tall?
Just compare.

The far away view has something wrong with the way the eyes are positioned, I cannot help you on that one sorry.

Always have a sharp pencil.
 
Sep 19, 2007 at 10:53 PM
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I need to work on my anime hair. Can't ever get it right.
 
Sep 20, 2007 at 12:18 AM
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i thought i drew sucky hair, it just never seems right when i do it,

yeah i love the clothing ive been practising but the folds still seem bad :D

also yeah i should use a sharp pencil, i forget i have a sharpener next to me :eek:
 
Sep 20, 2007 at 12:53 AM
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xristosx said:
i thought i drew sucky hair, it just never seems right when i do it
There are many different variations on hair. Go watch some anime and play attention to the way everything is drawn, if only they had this as homework for school. :eek:
 
Sep 20, 2007 at 3:45 AM
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andwhyisit said:
There are many different variations on hair. Go watch some anime and play attention to the way everything is drawn, if only they had this as homework for school. :eek:

i do copy some, the hair in the picture i drew sorta had a variation of sakura form naruto :D
 
Sep 20, 2007 at 4:54 AM
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xristosx said:
i do copy some, the hair in the picture i drew sorta had a variation of sakura form naruto :eek:
But it also has to fit what you are trying to draw.
 
Sep 20, 2007 at 5:54 AM
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it was sorta a ruffed up girl thats why i had the jacket
 
Sep 20, 2007 at 6:38 AM
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xristosx said:
it was sorta a ruffed up girl thats why i had the jacket
YOU ARE USING A GIRL AS A TEMPLATE FOR A GUY?????
 
Sep 20, 2007 at 8:27 AM
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Sep 20, 2007 at 12:23 PM
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im really confused now.... i ment it was sorta a ruffed up girl thats why used the jacket for her if that makes sense but nevermind now :(
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any way ill get around to colouring that one,
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but for now i coloured the one i called the woman in the red dress :D

BEFORE YOU LOOK AND POST- i used a texture for the dress ,but i did shade and blend it in and colour it

http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t149/xristosx/dressgirl.jpg
and the lineart just because i can
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t149/xristosx/dressgirlline.jpg
 
Sep 20, 2007 at 12:43 PM
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xristosx said:
im really confused now.... i ment it was sorta a ruffed up girl thats why used the jacket for her if that makes sense but nevermind now :(
...
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any way ill get around to colouring that one,
.....................
but for now i coloured the one i called the woman in the red dress :D

BEFORE YOU LOOK AND POST- i used a texture for the dress ,but i did shade and blend it in and colour it

http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t149/xristosx/dressgirl.jpg
and the lineart just because i can
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t149/xristosx/dressgirlline.jpg
The arms and legs seem a bit thick, other than that the rest of the drawing looks excellent especially the hair and eyes, well done!!! :(
 
Sep 20, 2007 at 12:50 PM
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thanks, dammit always i do it thick but it looks bad to me when i do it thinner :D
 
Sep 20, 2007 at 1:16 PM
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yeah i have been looking in different animes i think my friend has it, ill get it off him
 
Sep 21, 2007 at 2:09 AM
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xristosx said:
im really confused now.... i ment it was sorta a ruffed up girl thats why used the jacket for her if that makes sense but nevermind now :(
...
............
any way ill get around to colouring that one,
.....................
but for now i coloured the one i called the woman in the red dress :D

BEFORE YOU LOOK AND POST- i used a texture for the dress ,but i did shade and blend it in and colour it

http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t149/xristosx/dressgirl.jpg
and the lineart just because i can
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t149/xristosx/dressgirlline.jpg

She looks exceedingly angry.
 
Sep 21, 2007 at 2:37 AM
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xristosx said:
im really confused now.... i ment it was sorta a ruffed up girl thats why used the jacket for her if that makes sense but nevermind now :(
...
............
any way ill get around to colouring that one,
.....................
but for now i coloured the one i called the woman in the red dress :D

BEFORE YOU LOOK AND POST- i used a texture for the dress ,but i did shade and blend it in and colour it

http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t149/xristosx/dressgirl.jpg
and the lineart just because i can
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t149/xristosx/dressgirlline.jpg

Arms don't bend that way. There's a solid bone in there, it can't bend around like a noodle. >> <<
 
Sep 21, 2007 at 4:02 AM
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OMG it's noodle woman!!! :D
 
Sep 21, 2007 at 10:44 AM
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Her breasts looks like she's +50 *runs away*

You all should really buy Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain. If you can sketch things you see well, you can also draw things you think of well.
 
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