Honestly, although there aren't many differences (which is to be expected from such an early version), this idea is amazing. If you decide to continue working on this, I'd love to see this mod reach completion someday. However, I have to agree with HyMyNameIsMatt; don't rush, and think carefully.
As for the path to hell, I can't really think of anything, other than some paragraph length idea involving a tunnel that's somewhat difficult to get through.