Before Story Beta 0.2.1!

What's so fun about going back through the Egg Corridor? Literally nothing is changed.

 

Well, it is slightly different, as it's not exactly the same forwards and backwards, but I just thought it was a good enough level design for it.

 

I guess I could change it to where they are mining out the tunnel at the eastern side of the Sand Zone... Would that help any?

 

Uh, sure. To be honest I've yet to get past Mimiga Village, but uh... sure.

 

Did you visit the hermit? You can get up there with a booster 0.8, you know...

 

I didn't. It's not that I couldn't get past, it's just that I did that one playthrough with Arthur's house and then didn't turn the game back on
But hey why don't I do that right now and even do that thing with the pictures and commentary everyone does nowadays

Okay let's get this thing started

Christ you're thin

Why are there fez-wearing gaudis

Sherlock Holmes, eat your heart out

It's okay, he'll show up for half a second at the beginning of Kingdom Hearts

I'll finish this tomorrow

 

ouch okay that was rude I apologize

Spoiler

okay les do dis
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should be "okay"

the facesprite doesn't add up to the sprite
+ the facesprite looks hella weird

unnecessary ENTER

Santa should be...looking to the right...

unnecessary linebreak

these sprite designs for the Gaudis
jesus christ

these bullets seem awfully dull for fire...

unnecessary ENTER

doesn't feel like an accomplishment...?

how

It should be Equip.

can't interact with the bunny man
oh no

I CAN'T PRESS D O W N
OH NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

biooooonn
come onnn
fix the gaaammmeee

 

I will fix it, just need to make wind fortress. I got the screen shots, but I'm to tired to place the tiles correctly...

 

Hm...
With the events of this story taking place several years before the events of Cave story, the Wind Fortress doesn't necessarily have to be exactly the same, only similar.
Just a thought.

 

Yeah, I know what you mean. I was going to make it possible with the Jet-pack, which the regular one isn't capable of...
I will also change all instances of "Ok", because Aar made a hilarious video about it...

 

Time to finish what I started

Why

*equip
Also, I didn't take a picture, but if you want to know whether or not something's useful, just ask this guy.

Dinner?

Y-y-y-yup, the only other thing that doesn't want to kill you for what is presumably miles is dead. Tough shit.
Alright I'll finish what I started later

 

Yeah... I suck at my writing skills. My friend said he could help me out with the lines and stuff.

 

Alright time to finish what I started to finish

Why yes that sounds like a perfectly rational thing to do
Just go ahead and ask me to kill all my brethren
Not like I should stay here and take care of you or anything
Not that I would want to
Bitch

Why are you such a whiny bitch
Why am I such a heartless monster

My gun fires toenails

Hello Mr. Tiny Crying Man

Dafuq kinda escaped mental patient am I talking to

This door isn't a real door
It just makes a noise and teleports you
Magic

Kudos to whoever mows the lawns here
You managed to mow like 5 blades
Congrats

Why is the Mimiga Village connected to the Sand Zone and Grasstown through a graveyard?

This door doesn't even pretend to open
I would go and put all the other pictures of fake doors, but it would take years. Just know that pretty much every door after Grasstown doesn't open correctly. Oh, and a lot of them are only doors on one side.

Really
Like it's been there that long
Alright

*where
And yeah, just ask a tiny little girl about it
Makes sense

Why are all the mimigas just wandering around holding shovels and not talking to me

Yeah just give it to the random robot you met 5 seconds ago

Wait then how will Quote get it

Yeah this seems to be working well

*destination

Wait if I take this how will Quote get it

I failed to take a picture, but like
A tall man with a hat
That's oddly specific
Also the hat guy is anything but tall

Wtf is even happening right now

I again failed at taking a picture, but Bion frowns when he says "Thanks".

This entire conversation is written very poorly.

The mimigas are waterbenders

This entire level makes no sense at all
Like how did I get there
Why are there a bunch of red faces
Wtf

Dafuq is up with that terrain
Anyway I couldn't figure out where to go after that so I guess that's it.
The mod isn't bad, but the dialogue and storytelling lives a lot to be desired. 5/10.

 

I have seen many of the errors, and I know about the stupid text. I will be sure to fix it all. Also, you are supposed to take her back down to the teleporter. Be sure to grab the laser, which is were the counter originally was, then you check the computer again. Also, I will explain what happens to all the stuff later. Hint: It involves a witch.

 

I went to the counter room on the way up, the chest didn't open. Does it open now that I have a lady?

 

You break the lock open, but I think that's only with the text in the version I'm working on...
You can get it once you get Comma from the Pit.

 

Oh, is that who that is? Alright then, I'll check it out. Probably won't do any more commentary though.

 

Yeah, I really need to implement the hint system, if only temporarily...

 

I will also change all instances of "Ok", because Aar made a hilarious video about it...

 

Thanks for posting that. So, I will now change the programs to teleporters, so no more stupidity!