Before Story Beta 0.2.1!

Dec 6, 2014 at 2:03 AM
Thatnamelessguy
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What's so fun about going back through the Egg Corridor? Literally nothing is changed.
 
Dec 6, 2014 at 2:14 AM
janekhan
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Well, it is slightly different, as it's not exactly the same forwards and backwards, but I just thought it was a good enough level design for it.
 
Dec 6, 2014 at 3:23 AM
Bionicobot
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I guess I could change it to where they are mining out the tunnel at the eastern side of the Sand Zone... Would that help any?
 
Dec 6, 2014 at 4:21 AM
janekhan
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Uh, sure. To be honest I've yet to get past Mimiga Village, but uh... sure.
 
Dec 6, 2014 at 4:32 AM
Bionicobot
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Did you visit the hermit? You can get up there with a booster 0.8, you know...
 
Dec 6, 2014 at 5:14 AM
janekhan
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I didn't. It's not that I couldn't get past, it's just that I did that one playthrough with Arthur's house and then didn't turn the game back on
But hey why don't I do that right now and even do that thing with the pictures and commentary everyone does nowadays

Okay let's get this thing started
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Christ you're thin
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Why are there fez-wearing gaudis
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Sherlock Holmes, eat your heart out
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It's okay, he'll show up for half a second at the beginning of Kingdom Hearts

I'll finish this tomorrow
 
Dec 6, 2014 at 5:27 AM
Spirit
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ouch okay that was rude I apologize
okay les do dis
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should be "okay"

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the facesprite doesn't add up to the sprite
+ the facesprite looks hella weird

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unnecessary ENTER

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Santa should be...looking to the right...

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unnecessary linebreak

these sprite designs for the Gaudis
jesus christ

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these bullets seem awfully dull for fire...

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unnecessary ENTER

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doesn't feel like an accomplishment...?

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how

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It should be Equip.

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can't interact with the bunny man
oh no

I CAN'T PRESS D O W N
OH NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
biooooonn
come onnn
fix the gaaammmeee
 
Dec 6, 2014 at 5:46 AM
Bionicobot
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I will fix it, just need to make wind fortress. I got the screen shots, but I'm to tired to place the tiles correctly...
 
Dec 6, 2014 at 6:04 AM
Zenix
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Hm...
With the events of this story taking place several years before the events of Cave story, the Wind Fortress doesn't necessarily have to be exactly the same, only similar.
Just a thought.
 
Dec 6, 2014 at 2:27 PM
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Yeah, I know what you mean. I was going to make it possible with the Jet-pack, which the regular one isn't capable of...
I will also change all instances of "Ok", because Aar made a hilarious video about it...
 
Dec 6, 2014 at 4:56 PM
janekhan
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Time to finish what I started

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Why
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*equip
Also, I didn't take a picture, but if you want to know whether or not something's useful, just ask this guy.
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Dinner?
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Y-y-y-yup, the only other thing that doesn't want to kill you for what is presumably miles is dead. Tough shit.
Alright I'll finish what I started later
 
Dec 6, 2014 at 5:11 PM
Bionicobot
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Yeah... I suck at my writing skills. My friend said he could help me out with the lines and stuff.
 
Dec 6, 2014 at 5:28 PM
janekhan
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Alright time to finish what I started to finish

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Why yes that sounds like a perfectly rational thing to do
Just go ahead and ask me to kill all my brethren
Not like I should stay here and take care of you or anything
Not that I would want to
Bitch
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Why are you such a whiny bitch
Why am I such a heartless monster
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My gun fires toenails
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Hello Mr. Tiny Crying Man
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Dafuq kinda escaped mental patient am I talking to
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This door isn't a real door
It just makes a noise and teleports you
Magic
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Kudos to whoever mows the lawns here
You managed to mow like 5 blades
Congrats
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Why is the Mimiga Village connected to the Sand Zone and Grasstown through a graveyard?
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This door doesn't even pretend to open
I would go and put all the other pictures of fake doors, but it would take years. Just know that pretty much every door after Grasstown doesn't open correctly. Oh, and a lot of them are only doors on one side.
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Really
Like it's been there that long
Alright
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*where
And yeah, just ask a tiny little girl about it
Makes sense
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Why are all the mimigas just wandering around holding shovels and not talking to me
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Yeah just give it to the random robot you met 5 seconds ago
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Wait then how will Quote get it
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Yeah this seems to be working well
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*destination
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Wait if I take this how will Quote get it
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I failed to take a picture, but like
A tall man with a hat
That's oddly specific
Also the hat guy is anything but tall
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Wtf is even happening right now
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I again failed at taking a picture, but Bion frowns when he says "Thanks".
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This entire conversation is written very poorly.
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The mimigas are waterbenders
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This entire level makes no sense at all
Like how did I get there
Why are there a bunch of red faces
Wtf
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Dafuq is up with that terrain
Anyway I couldn't figure out where to go after that so I guess that's it.
The mod isn't bad, but the dialogue and storytelling lives a lot to be desired. 5/10.
 
Dec 6, 2014 at 5:55 PM
Bionicobot
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I have seen many of the errors, and I know about the stupid text. I will be sure to fix it all. Also, you are supposed to take her back down to the teleporter. Be sure to grab the laser, which is were the counter originally was, then you check the computer again. Also, I will explain what happens to all the stuff later. Hint: It involves a witch.
 
Dec 6, 2014 at 6:19 PM
janekhan
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I went to the counter room on the way up, the chest didn't open. Does it open now that I have a lady?
 
Dec 6, 2014 at 6:22 PM
Bionicobot
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You break the lock open, but I think that's only with the text in the version I'm working on...
You can get it once you get Comma from the Pit.
 
Dec 6, 2014 at 6:24 PM
janekhan
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Oh, is that who that is? Alright then, I'll check it out. Probably won't do any more commentary though.
 
Dec 6, 2014 at 6:25 PM
Bionicobot
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Yeah, I really need to implement the hint system, if only temporarily...
 
Dec 6, 2014 at 9:16 PM
Aar
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Bionicobot said:
I will also change all instances of "Ok", because Aar made a hilarious video about it...
Click to expand...
 
Dec 6, 2014 at 9:32 PM
Bionicobot
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Thanks for posting that. So, I will now change the programs to teleporters, so no more stupidity!
 
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