Substory (No, not in as in the food!)

Jul 5, 2011 at 9:35 PM
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So I had an idea. (ya I know I hate it too when there's no pics or anything too but as of now this is just an idea) while on the metro I was thinking about cave story. Then I thought about my dog mod. So I thought I should make a mod about my dog. Im hoping to have some humor and good story ect.. So it begings......

Things/ people I need:
An .org maker.
someone who can tell me how to change what characters, signs ect.

(sorry for any errors in spelling or grammar)

Intro...

First cut seen Is your flashback/ dream of you and you owner in NYC walking.
You wake up in a subway station and your an amnesic dog. You look at your self and see on your collar your name is "Fluffy". The whole game will consist of flat areas and escalators.

Characters:
Fluffy
quote
Owner Bob(Bob ya that's right ur owners name is bob.) is curly brace
Gunsmith and labyrinth store owner are Naughty nono pills and stuff dealers.
Kazuma is a dog named "Skillet" spotted and is you best friend
Ballos is
Dont read if you want a funny ending!
John travolta as a reference to phelam 123. Lol.
More characters to come.


Mimga:
I'm not trying to be racist or sexist or anything!!! It's just how I think the mimiga would look if they were people!!

King: White man
Eating mimiga (can't remember his name): large black man.
Torko: white woman. I need to know if the only time Torko uses the screaming running is when you find her in the cellar.
More mimga to come.

Armsi/tems/misc.:
Polar star: pistol
Spur: pimped-out pistol
Whimsical star: LSD
Health refill: fire hydrant (thx kick a*# for the idea!)
Silver locket:diamond necklace.
More items to come.

So after you wake up you go through "first station" and find "gunsmith" you talk to him and he'll tell you take what ever you want the popo will be there any second. So you take the polar star which will be a pistol. Second cut scene is your owner/bob getting onto subway wondering were fluffy/ you are. After you get out of first station you listen to king/middle-aged buiseness man talk with toroko the middle-aged kinda business women talk about business. then fall like usual Talk to king an he will say "woah! Talking dog! I need to lay of the shrooms!" now you'll notice the entire mimiga village is a subway station area. The reservoir will be the "leaking station" and the fishing mimiga will be a worker and the leak will be coming from the giant whole that's in the ceiling which I will make look like a pipe. Go in the water and find the silver locket is a diamond neckalce

More later.
 
Jul 5, 2011 at 9:40 PM
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A naughty no-no pill dealer?
Hmmmmmmmmm.
 
Jul 5, 2011 at 10:11 PM
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Good idea. I'd like to see this continue.
 
Jul 5, 2011 at 11:16 PM
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Dog Story! Can we see the dog (quote) go on a fire hydrant?? jks jks. No it sounds like an interesting idea. Are you going to change any of the monsters??
 
Jul 5, 2011 at 11:45 PM
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Ya I think I'll make enemies metro/subway train drivers. No one likes them. But I'll leave the bats those seem like something you'd see in a subway.
 
Jul 6, 2011 at 1:28 AM
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Professor Fufflykins said:
No one likes them.
I protest!
I've met quite a few nice ones.


Don't stereotip.
 
Jul 6, 2011 at 2:49 AM
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Sorry it's just you can't understand anything they say on the Intercom!!!!! Lol jk I couldn't sprite that anyways.
 
Jul 6, 2011 at 12:27 PM
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For the actual type of tile to be used, cave editor is about as good as you can get.


For drawing, use ms paint.
 
Jul 6, 2011 at 3:38 PM
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Hell yer...Fire hydrant on me. So the doctor? Could he be a drug lord or something. That would make sense because the red crystal kinda makes the doctor crazy?? xD Maybe he has found some new drug concoction?
 
Jul 6, 2011 at 8:28 PM
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Well he could be it's still a wip.
 
Jul 7, 2011 at 2:07 PM
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Jack could be a nice store owner
Pretty corny huh.

Oh, it's Toroko by the way.
 
Jul 7, 2011 at 2:20 PM
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Well I still think the Doctor should be a back-street gangster or drug lord. But yes Jack would make a good store owner
 
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