Sturmfaust II (Need Artists)

Also his shoulders look rather stationary, when they should be moving while he walks too. Makes him look very stiff.

 

What's his name?

I didn't thought about a name for him yet D:

 

I didn't thought about a name for him yet D:

I vote for Panzer but name too common(Panzer is a tank right?)

@GIRakaCHEEZER
Thanks for pointing out

@FireOneThousandFiftyTwo
Darn, The Leg Part Is really Tricky but I making Progress..

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Comments? about the leg I mean..

 

How the joint bends on the right is a little off visually, but you really nailed the stepping animation.

 

I agree with fire.
The stepping animation looks really good so far

 

How the joint bends on the right is a little off visually, but you really nailed the stepping animation.

Thanks!

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Comments? about the leg I mean..

Yeah, what Fire said. It almost looks like he's got the legs of a raptor or something. Then again, that might be what Shi was going for...

 

There was just that one little lump in one of his legs that seemed a bit too round.

 

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I'd Try again, I don't know..

 

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If You can, can you point it out?

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I'd Try again, I don't know..

The new image looks a lot more realistic and "grown up". But it looses much cuteness for that, the other picture was much more cute, she still looks pretty sweet though. I would like a combination between this one, your last one and my original concept of the character o: I really like what you have done with this picture. She doesn't wear these things you put on her Hand though Plus you forget the bracelets. But since it's only concept art and not the final art, that's okay o:

Thanks!

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I lol'd.

 

So.. Is it a little too high? or Too round? or too Bendy

Combining the original one(yours), The super cute one(Big head), and the mature one?

Hmm.. Brain storming(Im Itchy, Im tursty, Im hungry, GIRLS!)

anyway I'm working on the arms(while walk animation) and shooting #1(the last one was shooting #2) tomorrow or later( if there's no problem ) I'm working on shooting 45 degrees upward ani, 90 degrees upward ani, 45 degrees downward ani, jumping ani, and idle..

 

I'm hungry too, I should get some food o:

Another song for the game is done:

http://music.tile44.org/.Unreleased/S. P. Gardebiter - Self-destruction mode initiated ~ Alarm.mp3

So.. Is it a little too high? or Too round? or too Bendy

I guess it's a bit too bendy, it really stands out, if you look at the animation. o:

Combining the original one(yours), The super cute one(Big head), and the mature one?

Yes, except for the big head, don't make it too big Like: 20% Original, 40% Cute, 40% Mature. If you only try combining the mature one with the cute one, that's okay o:

anyway I'm working on the arms(while walk animation) and shooting #1(the last one was shooting #2) tomorrow or later( if there's no problem ) I'm working on shooting 45 degrees upward ani, 90 degrees upward ani, 45 degrees downward ani, jumping ani, and idle..

Oh yeah, talking about degrees: Would be 0 to 345 okay for you? o: In 24 parts, 15 degrees per part. Because in the game you can Aim with the mouse and it looks much better if the characters arms are going to be drawn by a drawer. If you do that, please do it without drawing the weapon too, I guess the game will do a good job at rotating the guns, but it's not the same with the characters arms o:

Oh yeah and work whenever you have time for it, I'll probably won't be finished too soon with the SFME.

 

Just split the characters into torso, head, and legs. It's easier to do with multiple animations at once. If you really need to, you could just put them together when it's done.

 

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Fuckin' great. Definitely fappable now. Smooth hair, full lips, slender, cute small chest, short skirt + zettai ryouiki...

IS THIS THE FEELING THEY CALL LUST!?!?!?

Shi seems to want more moemoe, however. Maybe you should make the face a little bit more childish...? Personally, I think the design fits the world while still being hot, so I think it's all good.

 

I think that her appearance needs to fit her temper. It's hard to describe in words. The newest design looks too mature, too self-confident etc. While the other design is too chibi, too cute. I think her personality and behaviour is: Thoughtful, pensive, hopeful, keeps a clear head, canny and sometimes even really brave.

Shi seems to want more moemoe, however. Maybe you should make the face a little bit more childish...?

Childish isn't probably a good idea, I guess.

Personally, I think the design fits the world while still being hot, so I think it's all good.

The point is, that I wasn't going for a "look, there's your average modern, hot, self-assertive teenage girl".
Don't get me wrong, I never said that the newer picture is bad, in fact I really like the design and the idea. But it doesn't fit her. I have a picture of my character in my head.

This will probably help:

 

so a female version of me?
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Nice Job.
Spamming as Mod in a highly active development thread.

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Nice dual-captioning you did there Garde

 

Thanks Schoko.

so a female version of me?
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No, of course not.

 

If it sucks.. Ver. 2~!

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Nice Job.
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Nice dual-captioning you did there Garde

Screenshotting and sigging this immediately.

This will probably help:

Nice taste in women, bro.