Zenix said:
Unreasonable Behavior -
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This was more of a test to try out the new version of ORGMaker, and I must say that I love the new features.
Oh look a song I am familiar enough with to provide detailed critique.
The intro is wrong. You're right with how it starts out with F to E, but then in the second bar the original song strums the E key and doesn't go back to F like yours does.
Instrument 1 (using orgmaker 2 names here so this is the first slotted wave) is wrong at bar 10. It should be "B C D B" here, not "A B C B". Same at bar 14, it should be "B C D B" again instead of whatever it was you had their originally.
I'm really not sure what instrument 2 is trying to do here from bars 24 to 32. It just doesn't sound right or like it's even in the original song, and muting this instrument at this part makes the org sound better.
I'm just going to skip to bar 56 now since the parts between 32 and 56 don't sound quite right but at bar 56 it very clearly sounds wrong. This part just sounds completely wrong, especially the lead here. At bar 60 you have instruments 5 and 8 playing 3 times on beats 1, 2, and 3 when really from listening to the song it sounds like they should only be hitting 1 and 3.
But yeah this org sounds like it needs a *lot* of work still before it can do the original any justice or any respect (I've stopped trying to find all the specific inaccuracies at this point because I would be here awhile if I did that). Granted this is a difficult one to try to remake in orgmaker due to the complexity of its samples/instruments (voices are the worst to try to emulate in orgmaker), but it could still be done much better.