So, your song started out with a minute-long introduction that sounded vaguely like Moonsong. Bad.
Then a minute long section that blew me away. Awesome.
Then a half minute long jumble of notes. Bad.
More awesomeness. More awesomeness. Good.
Some parts dragged on. Bad.
You played with the notes a bit, but left them unchanged for the most part. Cool.
You didn't do much with the last half of the original Moonsong. I like that part, and I think lots of others do too. Bad.
But it was better than Mimiga Vibe, at least.