Cave Story 3D project

May 14, 2009 at 1:13 AM
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Heh...

Moddex said:
Erm, Sue in that render looks sorta like the Stay Puffed Marshmallow Man. o.o

Like the others said, needs more definition. Avoid so much cell smoothing. It's making everything look a little... Pillow-like in definition.
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I thought it kinda suited her..
I mean, she's a humanoid rabbit.....
 
May 14, 2009 at 1:17 AM
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VoidMage_Lowell said:
Ergh...I'ma feel uncomfortable talking about this...but...
The breasts on the Curly you've made are actually bigger than in any of the original artworks, or even any fan-made ones...{'Cept for a few, which I look down upon >.>;}
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Well, if you look at these illustrations made by pixel himself, they're not small, but not big either. Are they really that big on my model? :D

http://www.miraigamer.net/cavestory/images/hospital.gif
http://www.miraigamer.net/cavestory/images/quoteandcurly.gif

I'm really not a fan of the usual exaggerated style myself.


Moddex said:
Erm, Sue in that render looks sorta like the Stay Puffed Marshmallow Man. o.o

Like the others said, needs more definition. Avoid so much cell smoothing. It's making everything look a little... Pillow-like in definition.
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Yep yep. I forgot to mention she's gonna get a fur. That will take care of the smooth look.
 
May 14, 2009 at 1:21 AM
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May 14, 2009 at 1:27 AM
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*cough*

NO...no... Of course not. Who would ever have dark thoughts about her?

I'll be making tentacles next.
 
May 14, 2009 at 1:29 AM
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Volant said:
*cough*

NO...no... Of course not. Who would ever have dark thoughts about her?

I'll be making tentacles next.
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Come on...
Curly deserves better...
 
May 14, 2009 at 1:54 AM
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The face structure of Curly seems... wrong.
 
May 14, 2009 at 2:00 AM
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Agreed

andwhyisit said:
The face structure of Curly seems... wrong.
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Hmmm....
*Looks back at the original artwork*
Looks like it could be a bit rounder and slightly flatter....
Cheekbones kinda stick out to me XD
Also, I noticed the hair...
Do ya think it would look better or not if it was one solid mass, like in the artwork?
Sorry if this is all a bit negative XD but Curly needs to look perfect :D
 
May 14, 2009 at 2:11 AM
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andwhyisit said:
The face structure of Curly seems... wrong.
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Mmh, I was actually going over her face just now. Something is off, and the cheekbones are definitely a part of it. It's also a bit dodgy around her mouth.

VoidMage_Lowell said:
Hmmm....
*Looks back at the original artwork*
Looks like it could be a bit rounder and slightly flatter....
Cheekbones kinda stick out to me XD
Also, I noticed the hair...
Do ya think it would look better or not if it was one solid mass, like in the artwork?
Sorry if this is all a bit negative XD but Curly needs to look perfect :D
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Don't worry about sounding negative as long as you are constructive as well. :D

I agree, the hair doesn't look too good. Sausage-hair isn't awesome. Will try making it a solid mass the next time I sit down and work on her.


EDIT: A small injection of personality helps a bit.

suewip3.jpg


EDIT2: And a small update on Curly.

New, more accurate colors, taken from the in-game sprite.

Made big changes to her torso. Hooray.

curly_newtop.png
 
May 15, 2009 at 12:15 AM
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Volant said:
Mmh, I was actually going over her face just now. Something is off, and the cheekbones are definitely a part of it. It's also a bit dodgy around her mouth.

Don't worry about sounding negative as long as you are constructive as well. :D

I agree, the hair doesn't look too good. Sausage-hair isn't awesome. Will try making it a solid mass the next time I sit down and work on her.


EDIT: A small injection of personality helps a bit.


EDIT2: And a small update on Curly.

New, more accurate colors, taken from the in-game sprite.

Made big changes to her torso. Hooray.
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i like sue's X thing on the nose, that seems to be popular in other fan works/the real game
 
May 15, 2009 at 12:24 AM
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Your Sue model is climbing the good side of the uncanny valley, but it's still kind of weird to look at. The ears definitely need to be bigger, and stick out at the base. Plus she looks bald and male. I can't recommend any way to fix that, sorry.
 
May 16, 2009 at 11:05 PM
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She'll be getting fur when/if I can figure out how to work the hair particle system in Blender. It doesn't really want to cooperate.

Longer ears incoming.

Also, she will hopefully be getting eyelashes or something that will make her look a lot more female than she does now.

Appreciate the comments. :D
 
Jan 9, 2010 at 7:05 PM
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Needs more Balrog

Those are pretty neat, but there is an edit button.
It's located right next to the quote button of any one of your posts. {If you're logged in}
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Anyways, wonder where Volant went....
Had my hopes up for him....
 
Jan 9, 2010 at 7:26 PM
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Re: Needs more Balrog




MY EYES THEY BURN
 
Jan 9, 2010 at 7:29 PM
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Starting to become one of those...

Oh whoops, heheh.
Forgot Cave Story Lite isn't default.
:D
 
Jan 9, 2010 at 10:29 PM
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Re: Starting to become one of those...

those models look niiice. I wish I could model, but...
 
Jan 10, 2010 at 2:47 PM
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OMG: According to Volant's profile, his last recent activity was "September 1st, 2009 05:55 PM"

EDIT: Someone should make a 3d model of the skeletal...skull...things that appear in the sand zone:

http://adamatomic.com/pics/hb/blog.jpg
 
Jul 20, 2010 at 2:51 PM
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So tell me.

What exactly is a Mimiga's hand like?

Paws?

Paw-hands?

Hands?

Gaaah...


Proof that I'm not dead:

 
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