Cave Story 2: Rise of the First Son, My Forum Book
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Nov 6, 2011 at 2:57 AM
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Nov 6, 2011 at 3:15 AM
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Noxid said:
Have you seen the plot? Well, I mean the story outline.
Nov 6, 2011 at 3:20 AM
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Noxid said:
Oh, yeah spoilers. Well there will be, and since you learn of it in the 2nd chapter, I will tell you. Loha, Ballos's son, is the major villain. How he is still alive will be explained.
Nov 6, 2011 at 5:32 AM
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Oh thank goodness, I thought this was abandoned.royaltyler said:
Also, threw is not the same as through.
Also also,
WTF BALLOS HAS A LIVING SON? I THOUGHT HE KILLED THEM!? Best idea ever.
Nov 6, 2011 at 5:40 AM
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Dunc2403 said:
I will be sure to correct that now. Around were did you find the error?
Nov 6, 2011 at 9:53 PM
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Dunc2403 said:
OMG!!! I AM NOW AN AN EXECUTIVE MEMBER!!!
Chapter 1 is finished. Get ready for Chapter 2: A Frenzied Balrog.
Nov 6, 2011 at 10:47 PM
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royaltyler said:
There's an edit button on e'ry post you make. You didn't have to
- a) Delete one post to add a minor statement.
- a) Inform us of that.
- b) Repeat a statement that you already made.
And now - in part (but not only) because of you - I shall annex this to my signature.
- Contrary to some people's beliefs, THIS IS NOT CORRECT CAPITALIZATION.
Nov 6, 2011 at 11:03 PM
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Shimmyzmizz said:
I know, but I do that to let everyone know a chapter was finished, oh but now I don't have to do that because here is a schedule of when I will be updating:
Saturday = I will be writing from 7:00 to 9:00
Sunday = I will be writing from 11:30 to 3:30
Monday = Major Writing Corrections
Sunday = I will be writing from 11:30 to 3:30
Monday = Major Writing Corrections
Oh, and people often compare full capitalization with major exclamation, so I don't care.
Nov 6, 2011 at 11:07 PM
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You already told us it was finished, and as for the bit about capitalization, while I normally don't endorse the overuse of exclamation points, it's better than using all caps.
Nov 6, 2011 at 11:11 PM
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Shimmyzmizz said:
You make me angry with your constant correct stuff.
Nov 6, 2011 at 11:51 PM
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If you didn't make so many mistakes he wouldn't have to correct you.
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Nov 7, 2011 at 12:49 AM
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Cave Story said:
Well it will be corrected on Monday, okay?
Oh, and I tried to upload it on Fanfic.net, this is what happened:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7529285/1/Cave_Story_2_Rise_of_the_First_Son
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Nov 7, 2011 at 4:15 AM
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Oh, one more thing. You could use to cut down on the exclamation points.
A good writer can express exclamation without that cursed mark.
A good writer can express exclamation without that cursed mark.