• Hey everyone happy Christmas Eve we're aware of what's happened with the source code so to keep this simple absolutely don't post it on the site or use it to make mods with (it's not particularly preferable toward this end anyway) and tread lightly in general until we see how this settles, thanks to all and have a great holiday season -DT

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Nov 6, 2011 at 2:52 AM
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This story has no conflict
 
Nov 6, 2011 at 2:57 AM
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unlike this thread!!!
 
Nov 6, 2011 at 3:15 AM
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Noxid said:
This story has no conflict

Have you seen the plot? Well, I mean the story outline.
 
Nov 6, 2011 at 3:17 AM
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No, I just read the eight pages in the OP
 
Nov 6, 2011 at 3:20 AM
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Noxid said:
No, I just read the eight pages in the OP

Oh, yeah spoilers. Well there will be, and since you learn of it in the 2nd chapter, I will tell you. Loha, Ballos's son, is the major villain. How he is still alive will be explained.
 
Nov 6, 2011 at 5:32 AM
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royaltyler said:
Stuff that was posted today.
Oh thank goodness, I thought this was abandoned.
Also, threw is not the same as through.
Also also,
WTF BALLOS HAS A LIVING SON? I THOUGHT HE KILLED THEM!? Best idea ever.
 
Nov 6, 2011 at 5:40 AM
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Dunc2403 said:
Oh thank goodness, I thought this was abandoned.
Also, threw is not the same as through.

I will be sure to correct that now. Around were did you find the error?
 
Nov 6, 2011 at 9:53 PM
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Dunc2403 said:
Whenever you said that people were rummaging through something.
Also, happy 100th post royaltyler!

OMG!!! I AM NOW AN AN EXECUTIVE MEMBER!!!

Chapter 1 is finished. Get ready for Chapter 2: A Frenzied Balrog.
 
Nov 6, 2011 at 10:47 PM
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royaltyler said:
OMG!!! I AM NOW AN AN EXECUTIVE MEMBER!!!

Chapter 1 is finished. Get ready for Chapter 2: A Frenzied Balrog.

There's an edit button on e'ry post you make. You didn't have to
  • a) Delete one post to add a minor statement.
  • a) Inform us of that.
  • b) Repeat a statement that you already made.

And now - in part (but not only) because of you - I shall annex this to my signature.
  • Contrary to some people's beliefs, THIS IS NOT CORRECT CAPITALIZATION.
 
Nov 6, 2011 at 11:03 PM
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Shimmyzmizz said:
There's an edit button on e'ry post you make. You didn't have to
  • a) Delete one post to add a minor statement.
  • a) Inform us of that.
  • b) Repeat a statement that you already made.

And now - in part (but not only) because of you - I shall annex this to my signature.
  • Contrary to some people's beliefs, THIS IS NOT CORRECT CAPITALIZATION.

I know, but I do that to let everyone know a chapter was finished, oh but now I don't have to do that because here is a schedule of when I will be updating:

Saturday = I will be writing from 7:00 to 9:00

Sunday = I will be writing from 11:30 to 3:30

Monday = Major Writing Corrections​

Oh, and people often compare full capitalization with major exclamation, so I don't care.
 
Nov 6, 2011 at 11:07 PM
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You already told us it was finished, and as for the bit about capitalization, while I normally don't endorse the overuse of exclamation points, it's better than using all caps.
 
Nov 6, 2011 at 11:11 PM
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Shimmyzmizz said:
You already told us it was finished, and as for the bit about capitalization, while I normally don't endorse the overuse of exclamation points, it's better than using all caps.

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You make me angry with your constant correct stuff.
 
Nov 6, 2011 at 11:51 PM
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If you didn't make so many mistakes he wouldn't have to correct you.

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Oh, one more thing. You could use to cut down on the exclamation points.

A good writer can express exclamation without that cursed mark.
 
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