WoodenRat said:1 minute sketch
a boy and his bird
trickybilly said:I`d need almost an hour to draw something like that. Here is my 1 minute (literarly) version of it, for the lolz:
Stylistic choice of mine. I like them.JakeXanth said:Those eyes
Are huge
They are kind of big, but hand size varies from style to style. They're an important part of the human body, so sometimes more emphasis is put on them.WoodenRat said:Her hands are large too, almost the size of a male.
Yeah I didn't plan out the lower half of her body well :/DoubleThink said:The lower part of her torso is also slightly too long, but all up it's pretty good
I like the nose. But as I said before, her posture and stuff I kind of messed up. Also she's hold the shotgun in an idle position, so I think that's how she would be holding it.cultr1 said:I would consider that a rough draft.
It needs some editing, but it has made progress toward becoming a good drawing.
I would tweak:
Her legs (but you already said that)
Her nose (I dunno, make it less tippy)
Her posture is weird (less leaning back, perhaps look up somebody holding a shotgun and see how their body is positioned)
And that's all I got right now, but those three things would really advance you forward.
Yeah I didn't really intend to draw it like that, but they do create a nice contrast.trickybilly said:Nice. Her intimidated look and the shotgun are in a funny contrast, I mean in a good way. Legs seem a little short, but hey not everybody has a perfect look, maybe she`s born like that.
WoodenRat said:1 minute sketch
a boy and his bird
WD said:i love you