I made two fanfictions. "Before it happened" and "The new crownholder"
anyway, I will read yours... soon...
edit: I refuse to read anymore of it since it is dumb. Main character as one of those killer robots? Curly as a killer robot? THE DOCTOR AS A MIMIGA?
Let's see...
*Picture of main character on the ground. The antenna on his hat is shaking*
Kazuma: "Sue? Sue! Where are you?"
*Return to picture of Main Character*
*He wakes up and screams*
*He gets up*
Main Character: "Where am...I? Who am I? How did I end up here?"