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Suote
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/zxrjg30zafozg4h/AAC3ZoCYtbfKTKn4IdbE5--ta?dl=0
super duper extremely rough draft of some CS prequel fanfic ive been working on for like half a year
its like the only thing ive ever written that i dont hate as of now
if you give feedback, in this case it's not about what you like or dislike about the story as it is now, but what it will (and/or should) be like later
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Suote
Suote
You might say "do what you want," but that doesn't tell me much, especially since I mainly put this here for outside feedback. I've already shown this to a few people I know personally, and I want feedback that isn't overly nice just because the reader knows me.
I still want you to give some feedback on how the story is now, just don't treat it like it's the final draft.
AlmaHexie
AlmaHexie
Alrighty then, but what I wrote basically said"do what you want and then link it"
Like I was saying that it’s not because someone cry ‘bout somethin that you need to justify it.
Don’t do like the mcu movies. It’s up to the reader imagination to play, you can put little story, suposicion and all that good stuff to leave the reader with questions, questions that he’s gonna have to think about to find a solution. Anyw
AlmaHexie
AlmaHexie
ay, I’ll be off writing what I thought of it.
KetchupDEF
The progression on The Sea Horse by Au5 makes me so angry! Two kicks, a snare, then another kick in one bar?!?!? That's messed up.
2DBro
2DBro
you dont understand
KetchupDEF
KetchupDEF
I should specify that is trance. And that's a bad progression for trance.
2DBro
i'd like to be under the sea in an octopus's garden in the shade
TPDraco
TPDraco
I'd rather be a blind moth
Xemous
Jade
Jade
I know this isn't the first time I've said this, but : I have a strong disdain for the way she handles graphics at this resolution, it just feels TOO simplistic for its own good.
YellowCake
YellowCake
Sweet, dude.
Noxid
i think it's really funny how many people sign up / reappear to say like "wow this place is so dead.. omg.. woah..."
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TPDraco
TPDraco
Wake up Serri, you've been in a coma for 17 years!
TLinkan
TLinkan
Oh no, it's 2002, I'm 7 years old, and MiraiGamer doesn't even exist yet!
Mr.Mold
Mr.Mold
This place that I used to go to still exists?! Bonkers
TPDraco
Is "The sickeningly cheerful say hello" thread broken for anyone else?
MyBoi
MyBoi
yep, even hax4ever's profile seems utterly broken
oceanicQuack
nicalis better make that cave story rpg a thing... i need it!
TLinkan
TLinkan
Just make your own with RPG Maker, all the cool kids are using RPG Maker!
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