Toroko Returns: A Cave Story Fanfiction

 

*sigh* Touché.

Yeah. You haven't proven anything.

I... am at a loss of words.

 

Just... Fix it...

 

Okay, let's just change the subject! Please? I didn't add the "(and other random stuff)" part to the title of the thread for nothing! Let's just talk about whatever the heck we want! As long as you and the other admins are okay with it, Mr. Noxid.

 

I don't understand what the issue is

 

you can't tease me like this, i simply must know what happens to damien

 

Not to rub the wound but you seem awfully protective on it though that's just a hunch. But hey if I'm allowed to change the thread does that mean I can stop it

 

you can't tease me like this, i simply must know what happens to damien

You seem to be the only person who's interested in Damien. No joke; you are literally the ONLY person who has mentioned Damien. Don't worry! You'll find out... soon...

 

I'm still waiting to see how this fanfic will turn out. I'd edit if i didn't have dial-up quality internet

 

I'm still waiting to see how this fanfic will turn out. I'd edit if i didn't have dial-up quality internet

Don't expect it to be amazing, but don't expect it to be horrible, either. That's all I can say about that topic. Oh, and by the way, I'm going to publish the story on FanFiction.net. Of course, I'm also working on a PaRappa the Rapper fanfiction, which I may actually publish first. Who knows? I can't really say when my fanfiction is going to be published, or even if it's going to be published at all! All I can say is that I'm going to work on it whenever I can.

 

Okay, so I have an alternate storyline for Toroko Returns. It's actually the first storyline that I made for the fanfiction.
A mysterious figure travels back in time to prevent Quote from dealing the final blow. The figure somehow manages to tame Toroko, and he tells Quote to find someone named Yoru Satō (or Julio, as he was originally going to be named). Gyuko Vasques Maidoki II and Laikidi Rikoju Maidoki both learn that the figure is none other than Damien Marcus Maidoki, their own little brother. However, Damien has been split into five seperate beings... and Yoru just so happens to be one of them.
Tell me what you think of both storylines and which one you'd like me to go with.
And yes, Gyuko's full name is "Gyuko Vasques Maidoki II", and Laikidi's full name is "Laikidi Rikoju Maidoki".

 

Tell me what you think of both storylines and which one you'd like me to go with.

You know it could be useful if we at least got to see the beginning so we'd have a better grasp on what this is exactly about.

 

You know it could be useful if we at least got to see the beginning so we'd have a better grasp on what this is exactly about.

To be honest, I don't exactly know what you mean. Can you please explain in further detail?

 

Okay, bad news, guys. I won't be working on Toroko Returns for a while. It's just... I've overwhelmed myself with all of the other stories that I'm going to write, not to mention the fact that I still have lots of schoolwork I have to catch up on, but I promise I will work on the fanfic. Eventually. But right now, I'm working on a fanfiction called "Melinda Mörderspaß", which is based on the German Animal Crossing creepypasta that I mentioned earlier on the thread (Animal Crossing: Mörderspaß), and that's probably going to be the first story I publish. But once I've finished the other fanfictions that I'm working on, I'll probably work on Toroko Returns.

 

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HUZZAH!!!
I was messing around on Google Translate, and I tried to translate "Nemesis" from English to Japanese. Then, I decided to click on the "Swap Languages" button a few times, and here are the results:
Nemesis --> ネーミス --> Namis <--> ナミス
So, Yoru Satō / Julio Satō is now going to be called "Namis"! Maybe...
Not only that, but Toroko Returns is going to take place after Curly's Story.
Oh, and if you're reading this, Serri, I apologize if I'm the one making all those spammy posts. By the way, can you please tell me what "[/thread]" means?

 

It is in fact serri that was being spammy, the box of text is a infraction warning

 

can you please tell me what "[/thread]" means?

This forum like many forums uses BBCode as its markup language. Blocks of BBCode are opened like [block] and closed like [/block]. What Serri was saying was that because you sent the message that said the project was going to be delayed that the thread is over with or finished.

 

HUZZAH!!!
Nemesis --> ネーミス --> Namis <--> ナミス

Nemesis should come out to ネメシス, not ネーミス.
Also I'd recommend not naming a character based on a google translate butchering of a word in Japanese.
Not that it sounds bad per se, but the fact that it's a mistranslation takes some of the meaning away from the original word, imo

 

Yinga... thanks for the advice. I'm going to use the word "Namis" in a different way... but how, exactly, should I use it? Hmm...
*gasp* HUZZAH!!!
I've got it! There's a special type of robot in Toroko Returns, called a "NAMiS-S" robot. NAMiS-S robots are very humanlike in both appearamce and behavior, and they're capable of eating, sleeping, breathing, and making their own desicions. The first two NAMiS-S robots ever built were armed scout robots who were sent to an island populated by rabbit-like creatures known as the Mimiga. Those robots were sent to that island to destroy an artifact known as the Demon Crown. Doesn't that just sound so familiar? Here's a hint:

Spoiler

"..." {...}

Oh, and P.S., I don't think I'm going to have any Quote x Misery in my story, but I will most certainly continue to have Sue x Toroko in my story. Why? Because I think Sue x Toroko is cute, that's why! As for Quote, he's probably going to be shipped with Curly, and Misery might be shipped with Kazuma. Of course, the Quote x Curly and Kazuma x Misery isn't exactly 100% guaranteed (or your money back!) to be in my story, it's just that I'm just considering it.
By the way, Toroko seems to be hiding something... but what? All I know is that it's some sort of special "gift" that she was born with.