I think it's bad that I haven't even finished playing A Lost Land yet D: Anyway,
ED SPEELERS
-New music! Always a bonus. Can't quite place the title screen music, but the first cutscene sounds like a Moonsong remix, and then... SoM!
-Hey she's even called Luka! And HOLY CRAP IS THAT 7TH SAGA? I just finished playing that the other day.
-The facepics are nicely done, I really like anything hand-drawn. First boss battle is pretty standard, the thingies that give you exp are a nice though.
-First dungeon has really good enemy placement, especially with what I shall now refer to as the Evil Fuzzies.
-I'll wait until the end to comment on the story. In the meantime, a moving options room? How considerate!
-In the portal puzzle, you can activate one of the portals repeatedly to spawn endless copies of the second portal. As for the puzzle itself, I managed to solve it eventually. It's cool how it saves your progess... once you figure out that it actually does
-The way the second boss makes it hard to judge his attacks is really well-done, and I like how his eye flashes while he moves. The arena's a bit plain though, some hazards or an uneven floor would make it a really energetic fight.
-AUTUMN FESTIVAL WOO WOO
-Nice portal effect, but now I can't remember where this desert music comes from >_>
-That first jumpy face Skeleton-wannabe thing is placed really awkwardly, you pretty much have to wait for him to shuffle down through the thin passage before you can shoot him properly, but I guess there's a save just after that.
-Minor nitpick about the Crossbow in addition to what GIR said: they normally shoot bolts, not arrows
The story and dialogue so far is well-written and interesting; considering fairies abound it could be a lot lamer. The hacked enemies all have really fresh attack patterns, the challenge level is pretty balanced, and the new graphics and designs are tight. It's fun to recognise all the music, but they sound a bit out of place sometimes and a few of the instruments don't match up so well. The number of changes and effort you've put in in such a short time is really impressive though, this is a big step up from A Lost Land (not that it was bad or anything). I didn't know you could hax like this!
I await the next update and FASTER THAN THE SPEED OF SOUND.
Speaking of ALL, I'll might be able to update the Quickie Guide this week, provided I can finish off all the mods I need to. My contest entry will have to wait until the holidays though methinks