Mischievous robot remix

So here's the dealeo. This is my first remix ever. Not just first cave story remix, first ever remix.
Also about the name. I couldn't think of anything better.
http://dc589.2shared.com/download/7Y34d4ka/The_robot_is_a_spy.wav?tsid=20130927-223245-74a0cb64
I would also like to know whether or not it sucks, so a reply would be nice.

 

It doesn't necessarily suck, the remix at hand just isn't that original. Granted, I'm not saying remixes have to be original, but the instruments were bland and felt overused.

Spoiler

Although this does display an understanding of how remixes are made, it was rather a poor example of such. The instruments didn't differentiate as the song advanced, a nitpick in which I'll explain. As a remix progresses, it is suggested you modify the instruments to keep one enticed. It isn't required (as if much of his really did.), but it makes a remix less repetitive. Also, I found that this song didn't extend upon any of the original notation. Not that I'd care, but I figured it would be "helpful" (Nothing about this is helpful.) to inform you for your second(?) remix.

Despite such, it was a nice derivative of a song. Granted, I'd take this entire post with a grain of salt.

 

Thanks for the reply. I was planing to add some original stuff into it, but, as I said, I'm new to this.