I was bored and decided to make a sprite comic.

http://www.drunkduck.com/Cave_Story_____The_Lost_Caves/index.php?p=511953

There's Quote, who seems to be in a different cave this time.
The Author, AKA me, who uses Godmodding to screw up everyone else.
Jacob, the mixed up Cthulu or however you spell it
Runt, the small, purple critter.
And Curly, the mixed up, confused female robot.

 

Sorry but the presentation is really bad with nothing besides sprites and large amounts of empty space, recolours, a speechbox system that oozes laziness, and no background. Also an overdose of fourth wall material pretty much kills it. I would like to say something good about this but I can't.

Look up some good sprite comics on the net and try to follow their example.

 

Agreed. Sorry, but it's terrible.

If you halved the height of each panel, it would be slightly improved, but still not very good.

 

What's so bad about this?

C'mon, it's a good start. Every start is.




However, your random humour is too random that only people closely around your random frequency will be resonated. Try understanding what tickles others.


And improve A LOT on presentation. I think the two idiots above are right.

 

Hey! I'm not an idiot!

Yes, you could probably make it into a good comic, with some effort. But as it stands, it's bad.

 

I agree. It's pretty obvious you didn't spend even half an hour making those. No offense, but you should dedicate more time to this if you want to create a quality webcomic (or at least a readable one).