Well I've played it before a sec..
Very nice done!
First off all, some dialogs are umm, they need some "Enter" Keys
otherwise its a bit confusing...
And I didnt liked some of them for example most of Jacks and Kings.
Well but I liked most of your map design, it was a real challenge to do everything with bubbler (rocket launcher and fireball follows
) Egg Coridor was really nice; I liked the map design and the gameplay alot! Even the way you combined the upper way with the downer one it was pretty nice...
Almost Western Plains was a bit annoying but cool though.
But that "MALCO" thing was kinda crazy O_o Because MALCO is the Robot who was smashed by Balrog and not a power thing or something
The Dragon sisters made me swear they were too annoying I cant beat them :/ I had to use trainer but I just gave up at Eastern Wall... (It was too boring and annoying lol) But that "Clock Room" message was amusing.
Almost I noticed 2 bugs:
1. The music dont change if you come from Western Plains and go to the Mimiga thingie.
2. How to get the Life Capsule in sisters Room?! O_o
Well overall it was nice but sometimes it was way boring... I liked Egg Coridor alot