Kwote said:
1. He said his "loved ones" in the fan made translation. But we'll need someone with Japanese to check the original one.
Fan translation:
As I looked on, unable
to quell its fiery rage,<NOD<CLRit took from me my loved
ones, my children, my
dearest wife...<NOD<CLRTheir cries of agony
soared above the flames.
Official Translation:
So furious and unstoppable
was this force...<NOD
...that its fire consumed the
child who adored me,<NOD and the
wife who loved me...<NOD<CLR
They were swallowed by its
flames and suffered dearly.<NOD
...All because of my selfish
transgression.
Kwote said:
In the waterway cabin.
Fan translation:
Words light up the screen.<NOD<CLR
04-08-08 Wife bore child.
Official Translation:
Text is displayed on-screen...<NOD<CLR
04.08.08 My child is born.