Nov 1, 2008 at 6:56 PM
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jcys810 said:This is way too easy. :/
Took me a few tries to get to know what exactly the different tiles were. After that, it was too fucking easy. Seriously. :/
Edit - And seriously, improve on the grammar.
jcys810 said:...
The incoming transmission thing has some seriously horrendous spelling, a few grammar issues and a complete lack of punctuation according to my memory
WRONG! Grammar includes proper spelling, but it also includes proper syntax, usage, and othersuch things.DimJim said:Grammar is proper spelling,
... first toast?Now here's your first toast, revised parts are in bold
I'm creating a new mod.It's long..long..long..Well...long x 3000 Corridor.
There's a bit of monsters and traps
Can YOU solve the Not-Very-Legendary Corridor?
Size? 2047X15.
Picture is here:
Okay, that probably made you sound stupid but it should have helped. Now you know what grammar is ♪
wedge of cheese said:I must admit, I wasn't too impressed by this mod. However, out of curiosity I explored the CaveStory subfolder in your mod folder and found a couple of unfinished mods (king and vs), and within said mods I also found a couple of really awesome *.org files (namely 600 and 601 in the king folder). Lol, and the combination of Jenka1/Jenka2 with Pink Panther was cool too. Hopefully you eventually finish those mods.
Pretty sure that Xaser made those o_Owedge of cheese said:Lol, and the combination of Jenka1/Jenka2 with Pink Panther was cool too. Hopefully you eventually finish those mods.
DoubleThink said:Pretty sure that Xaser made those o_O
Lyger said:WRONG! Grammar includes proper spelling, but it also includes proper syntax, usage, and othersuch things.
... first toast?
In all seriousness, you did miss some:
I'm creating new mod. It's a long... long... long... well, long x 3000 corridor.
[There are/It has] some monsters and traps. ["A bit of" is generally not used for countable nouns]
Can YOU solve the Not-Very-Legendary Corridor?
Bit of size? 2047,15. [Not sure what this line means... ? Probably dimensions, as DimJim rendered it]
Pic... made one: [This falls under usage... it'd be more accurate to say you "took a screenshot" since you didn't literally make the picture, which would be more like if you opened the spritesheets and tilesets in an image editing program and assembled the scene from there, or just drew the picture yourself or something]
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