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I haven't listened to the original in a while, so I can't remember everything from it exactly, but am I correct in assuming that the section from about 2:10-3:40 or so an improv section? If so, nice job putting that in there! The higher trumpet's performance right after that wasn't exceptional, but those were pretty darn high notes. I'm somewhat disappointed there was no trombone part, but that's just because I play the bone myself. <img src='http://www.cavestory.org/forums/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/tongue2.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':p' />
Also lol, at the end, "You wrote that?"
So were you playing? If so, who were you? The group as a whole seemed to mesh well; in particular I liked listening to the bass line, the bassist played that well.
...I have no idea how to end this comment.
...That works, I guess.