Jul 2, 2022 at 10:35 PM
This is a pretty good transcription. It seems to capture the feel of the original quite well for the most part and overall. Instruments 4, 6, 7, and 8 could potentially be changed though. Measures 15 through 21 didn't feel quite as strong as in the original, so that's something I'd consider maybe tweaking if you were thinking about improving this song.