Geothermal Recreation Soundtrack

Alrighty guys, hope I don't get yelled at for this one. No worries saxophone ( for those worried) does not carry the melody. I spent about two hours this morning working on this piece. I tried to make the song as close to the original as I can. I'm using garageband for those interested in which program I use. https://soundcloud.com/stormriderfim4

Constructive comments are well appreciated!

 

Well first, I didn't like how loud the bass was. The melody instrument sounded Alright, It was a little jarring at times since it sounded like it played wrong notes at times. Everything else was good though.

Keep working hard!

 

hmmm yea, I'll definitely see what I can do about that. Might throw the melody around and add some other instrument sections too. About the bass, I'll definitely try to turn it down!

 

Alrighty guys, hope I don't get yelled at for this one. No worries saxophone ( for those worried) does not carry the melody.

<3
The only reason I pointed that out is that you called it an orchestration, and saxophones are rarely even included in an orchestral ensemble, let alone carrying the melody.
As for this one, you're pretty reliant on your low brass section, which is one of the worse sounding instruments you have. Maybe try and find another instrument or vst for that.

 

Alrighty. Noted will make the change soon.