A Day in the Life, a new forum book

Apr 22, 2011 at 5:54 AM
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I wanted to do a forum book, went searching for ideas, and thought a compilation of different CS Characters' PoV on their lifes would be something different and fun to write.

CHAPTER 1: BASIL

When the white spiky thing woke up that day, he was sure it was going to be just another normal day in the Egg Corridor. He started his endless dashing, and disintegrated a careless beetle. Suddenly, a robot appeared at the far end, walking down the passage. Basil was determned to catch him! He bolted across the passage, but the robot jumpec up into an acadjent passage. Then he was back for a second, and then gone. He was dissapointed, as he wanted to kill something. Minutes later, the pesky bot was back. Then he was gone, having jumped into an egg. On the way back, Basil maaged to touch the robot, destroying it. Basil felt some satisfaction in that. Later there was some yelling in an above corridor, but he didn't care. There was no more excitement throughout the rest of the day. Suddenly, Basil heard a rumbling. The last thing Basil the spiky thing ever saw was a huge portion of an above chamber crumbling over him.

The End...
 
Apr 22, 2011 at 6:13 AM
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Badnik96 said:
different and fun

I'm sure your unique idea wil be enjoyed by everybody because it's so fun.
 
Apr 22, 2011 at 6:25 AM
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Fun to write, silly.

double post

Chapter 1's up, enjoy it.
 
Apr 22, 2011 at 1:10 PM
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Wouldn't it be awesome if we could all contribute?
 
Apr 22, 2011 at 1:18 PM
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WoodenRat said:
Wouldn't it be awesome if we could all contribute?

I second that motion, as long as we don't make idiotic decisions.
 
Apr 22, 2011 at 1:26 PM
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WoodenRat said:
Wouldn't it be awesome if we could all contribute?

yes, but some troll would sabotage it for sure, unless there would be countermeasures.

@Badnik If you seriously want to make this book best wishes. Though make your chapters a bit longer :D
 
Apr 22, 2011 at 5:35 PM
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Make sure you have no pronoun confusion. Also you might want to write in first person. Alsoalso show, don't tell.
 
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